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Zombie_Slave wrote:walkingdude225 wrote:I actually love the part of the tale of the car dropping down her throat, and then realizing she can eat more. I also love how Nyarlathotep was behind it all.
Thanks for your input. Bonus points if you knew who Nyarlathotep was. Maybe it was a bit much but it was a thrill to put Mythos stuff in the story.
He was the man in the robes at the end. I love it I say put more in the next part of the story.
I cant believe everyone who's saying this needs a part 2... i mean out of EVERY story that zombie has posted on here, THIS needs a part 2? What would happen? Giant girl terrorizes normal sized people, eats them. There ya go, second part done. I'd much rather see his effort focused on new stories, finishing partly written ones, or even do a 2nd part to stories that would put forth a much more rich vore experience. It seems since Disturbedthings closed down, the community has been in kind of a weird funk
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Zombie_Slave wrote:I don't know what to do with a part 2!
I just thought it would be interesting if she meets up with Dagon or even Cthulhu and they teach her how to be a dark god. That is all, I hope you did not think I was demanding you to write a 2. It was just the way you ended it that is all. However, It would not hurt me if you do not write a part two to this story.
Oh no I didn't think you we're being demanding at all. Nice job name-dropping Dagon I honestly hadn't thought of anything past the ending of the story but if something comes I'll let everyone know!
theheadsn wrote:I cant believe everyone who's saying this needs a part 2... i mean out of EVERY story that zombie has posted on here, THIS needs a part 2? What would happen? Giant girl terrorizes normal sized people, eats them. There ya go, second part done. I'd much rather see his effort focused on new stories, finishing partly written ones, or even do a 2nd part to stories that would put forth a much more rich vore experience. It seems since Disturbedthings closed down, the community has been in kind of a weird funk
This story was meant to leave you with the feeling that the world had changed and dark forces would eventually take over. However I think the character of Kelsey is intriguing to see again...but I think the story would turn from vore and focus on her gigantism and what it means for the world. Cool, but maybe not worth the effort in terms of this website (focus on vore). I don't know. I feel for the Kelsey character because I've seen so many people get viciously bullied in RL, so there's a little part of me that wants to see her again. If the stars are right she may continue her revenge in the future...
p.s. you are the best writer i've ever seen for this reason: everyone else writes stories with weird characters or creatures or furry vore, you just do straight college age giantess vore which is the best category by far
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christoph88 wrote:christoph88 wrote:Zombie_Slave wrote:
Sure. Just need to find the time.
find the time please! lol
Can you please stop making posts like this, the dude has a life and writes when he can, non stop demanding of stories are not going to speed anything up. You and a couple of others are literally acting like zombies but instead of brains you need vore stories. Its ok from time to time to ask for updates when the next story but making posts telling him to make time is rude. Leave this thread for actual discussion of his awesome stories.
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