Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby christoph88 » Tue Aug 27, 2013 8:49 am

Awesome story, loved the scenes in the stomach
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:02 pm

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walkingdude225 wrote:I actually love the part of the tale of the car dropping down her throat, and then realizing she can eat more. I also love how Nyarlathotep was behind it all.


Thanks for your input. Bonus points if you knew who Nyarlathotep was. :) Maybe it was a bit much but it was a thrill to put Mythos stuff in the story.



He was the man in the robes at the end. I love it I say put more in the next part of the story.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Milliways » Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:06 pm

I loved it a lot, and I definitely noticed an improvement from you as a writer. The mouth scenes were incredibly hot.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:01 pm

needs a part 2!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:58 pm

I don't know what to do with a part 2!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Wed Aug 28, 2013 7:32 pm

I cant believe everyone who's saying this needs a part 2... i mean out of EVERY story that zombie has posted on here, THIS needs a part 2? What would happen? Giant girl terrorizes normal sized people, eats them. There ya go, second part done. I'd much rather see his effort focused on new stories, finishing partly written ones, or even do a 2nd part to stories that would put forth a much more rich vore experience. It seems since Disturbedthings closed down, the community has been in kind of a weird funk
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 9:00 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:I don't know what to do with a part 2!


I just thought it would be interesting if she meets up with Dagon or even Cthulhu and they teach her how to be a dark god. That is all, I hope you did not think I was demanding you to write a 2. It was just the way you ended it that is all. However, It would not hurt me if you do not write a part two to this story. :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Ty975 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 9:49 pm

Dude, they could even just sacrifice people to her hunger as a part of the new world order
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:09 pm

Oh no I didn't think you we're being demanding at all. Nice job name-dropping Dagon ;) I honestly hadn't thought of anything past the ending of the story but if something comes I'll let everyone know!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:18 pm

theheadsn wrote:I cant believe everyone who's saying this needs a part 2... i mean out of EVERY story that zombie has posted on here, THIS needs a part 2? What would happen? Giant girl terrorizes normal sized people, eats them. There ya go, second part done. I'd much rather see his effort focused on new stories, finishing partly written ones, or even do a 2nd part to stories that would put forth a much more rich vore experience. It seems since Disturbedthings closed down, the community has been in kind of a weird funk


This story was meant to leave you with the feeling that the world had changed and dark forces would eventually take over. However I think the character of Kelsey is intriguing to see again...but I think the story would turn from vore and focus on her gigantism and what it means for the world. Cool, but maybe not worth the effort in terms of this website (focus on vore). I don't know. I feel for the Kelsey character because I've seen so many people get viciously bullied in RL, so there's a little part of me that wants to see her again. If the stars are right she may continue her revenge in the future...
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:19 pm

Ty975 wrote:Dude, they could even just sacrifice people to her hunger as a part of the new world order


Kelsey could have her own cult. Kelsey-cultists!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:20 pm

Milliways wrote:I loved it a lot, and I definitely noticed an improvement from you as a writer. The mouth scenes were incredibly hot.


Thank you!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby christoph88 » Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:40 am

I agree that he should focus his effort on partially written stories, they can be finished quicker than entirely new ones
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby christoph88 » Wed Sep 04, 2013 10:02 am

Storyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:24 am

any partially finished stories you could complete?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:27 am

p.s. you are the best writer i've ever seen for this reason: everyone else writes stories with weird characters or creatures or furry vore, you just do straight college age giantess vore which is the best category by far
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:07 pm

bradlax16 wrote:any partially finished stories you could complete?


Sure. Just need to find the time.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby christoph88 » Thu Sep 12, 2013 11:03 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:
bradlax16 wrote:any partially finished stories you could complete?


Sure. Just need to find the time.


find the time please! lol :wink:
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby christoph88 » Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:04 am

christoph88 wrote:
Zombie_Slave wrote:
bradlax16 wrote:any partially finished stories you could complete?


Sure. Just need to find the time.


find the time please! lol :wink:
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby dMONEY4121 » Mon Sep 16, 2013 2:00 am

christoph88 wrote:
christoph88 wrote:
Zombie_Slave wrote:
Sure. Just need to find the time.


find the time please! lol :wink:


Can you please stop making posts like this, the dude has a life and writes when he can, non stop demanding of stories are not going to speed anything up. You and a couple of others are literally acting like zombies but instead of brains you need vore stories. Its ok from time to time to ask for updates when the next story but making posts telling him to make time is rude. Leave this thread for actual discussion of his awesome stories.
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