Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Fri Dec 27, 2013 2:04 am

Her Walk on the Beach (F/f) - When Lauren took a walk on a deserted beach she never imagined she'd meet a giantess...especially not a hungry one.

I wrote this story several months ago; sorry it took me so long to post it.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Cuddlekins » Fri Dec 27, 2013 3:29 pm

A simple story, but satisfying. I do like how she toyed with her prey. I liked it a lot. o:
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Sat Dec 28, 2013 1:53 am

Simple; yet,brilliant, I wish I could be half the writer you are.
I met the Walkin Dude, religous, in his worn down cowboy boots <br>He walked like no man on earth <br>I swear he had no name, I swear he had no name <br>....The Alarm
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Sat Dec 28, 2013 2:39 am

Good stuff as usual.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Lupe » Sat Dec 28, 2013 2:37 pm

Thanks for the update! Not a huge fan of the willingness she showed, but great writing none-the-less!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby TheWiking2000 » Sun Dec 29, 2013 2:41 pm

I really like this story. Simple and to the point, without rushing it! Great read, well done.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Dec 29, 2013 11:35 pm

Cuddlekins wrote:A simple story, but satisfying. I do like how she toyed with her prey. I liked it a lot. o:


Thanks!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Dec 29, 2013 11:36 pm

walkingdude225 wrote:Simple; yet,brilliant, I wish I could be half the writer you are.


Thank you. And it just takes practice to improve with writing ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Dec 29, 2013 11:37 pm

Lupe wrote:Thanks for the update! Not a huge fan of the willingness she showed, but great writing none-the-less!


The willingness at the end really kind of bugged me. I tried to show that she really had no option but to give in to the giantess. However, in a "real" situation, I don't think a person would ever stop fighting to escape. Thanks for reading.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Dec 29, 2013 11:38 pm

TheWiking2000 wrote:I really like this story. Simple and to the point, without rushing it! Great read, well done.


Thank you. I've been trying to keep things simple lately. Thanks for reading.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:27 pm

12 inches of snow and a high temp of zero degrees Fahrenheit today...I wish I had a nice warm mouth to climb into.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Vorefreak » Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:29 pm

We have at least that much here, and our wind chill is -44.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:58 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Her Walk on the Beach (F/f) - When Lauren took a walk on a deserted beach she never imagined she'd meet a giantess...especially not a hungry one.

I wrote this story several months ago; sorry it took me so long to post it.


i really enjoyed this story it was classic ZS....just pure, awesome soft vore, reminded me of your earlier work

any new stories in the works?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Cuddlekins » Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:11 pm

It's cold and snowy here, too. My feet got all numb trying to shovel :c Ah well, it's warm inside in front of a good story. Good time for me to read and write, I'd say, and I'm going to seize on it.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Fri Jan 17, 2014 5:51 pm

I'd love to see another story involving a girl getting revenge on bullies, by swallowing them alive of course....much like "revenge of the tormented"....it's like the worst revenge ever ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Jan 20, 2014 3:45 pm

Hi all. I'll be on hiatus for a while so no new stories anytime soon. I have some things to take care of in RL but hope to be back.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:06 pm

It's okay, take all the time you need. Life is more important than silly fiction. Just handle what you need to get done. We will still be here when you're ready.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby blackskies » Wed Feb 19, 2014 12:12 am

come back to us ZS!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Feb 19, 2014 5:10 pm

blackskies wrote:come back to us ZS!


::pokes head in:: Hello? Whaz uuuup?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Sehnsucht » Wed Feb 19, 2014 5:54 pm

Oh no, ZS has been infected by the last millennium!

Hope all's well with you, mate :)
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