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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:48 pm

Swallowed at the Beach - (F/f, digestion)

A pretty basic giantess story. Not one of my best but I figure I'd post it anyway.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Cuddlekins » Mon Oct 20, 2014 6:42 pm

Man, wouldn't I like to write a basic giantess story after slogging through this 10k+ word behemoth of mine... >:V

But yes, basic but still enjoyable. A fairly quick read and easy to digest, for lack of a better term.

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The second girl near the end was a certainly pleasant surprise.
***Cuddlekins Vore Stories (May contain LOLI)
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(Mostly macro/micro F/f, some ?/F, some monster girl same-size.)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby io1908 » Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:02 pm

Every story of yours is unique. Even if you consider this one as inferior somehow, I enjoyed it once again because of you special writing talent.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Lupe » Wed Oct 22, 2014 1:22 pm

Thanks for posting! Keep up the great work!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby voreguy » Wed Oct 22, 2014 2:41 pm

I still loved this story even if you didn't like it that much, Zombie. You have great talent!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Fri Oct 24, 2014 12:58 pm

io1908 wrote:Every story of yours is unique. Even if you consider this one as inferior somehow, I enjoyed it once again because of you special writing talent.


This. every story written by you is good just because of your style of writing vore sequences....even your "bad" stories are amazing to us!!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:31 pm

Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for the kind words on my latest story. Thanks so much! Hopefully more to come soon.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Tue Nov 04, 2014 6:58 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for the kind words on my latest story. Thanks so much! Hopefully more to come soon.


I'm also hoping :D :D :D I can't see myself every getting tired of your stories
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Mon Nov 24, 2014 7:00 pm

if you are in need of inspiration I've always wanted to read a story about a victim being put inside a pill capsule and swallowed....I think that would be the ultimate torture.....to be floating in the stomach inside a pill capsule and having to watch the stomach break down all the food around you, all the while knowing that soon the capsule will dissolve and there will be nothing to protect you :D :D :D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue Nov 25, 2014 10:47 am

bradlax16 wrote:if you are in need of inspiration I've always wanted to read a story about a victim being put inside a pill capsule and swallowed....I think that would be the ultimate torture.....to be floating in the stomach inside a pill capsule and having to watch the stomach break down all the food around you, all the while knowing that soon the capsule will dissolve and there will be nothing to protect you :D :D :D


I wrote a story exactly like that...and I lost it. :( I can't find the file anywhere.

In other news it may be awhile for any new content. The company I work for suddenly decided to shut down so there's been a lot of turmoil in RL lately. I have to say goodbye to a lot of friends and coworkers I've known for years. I'm still employed along with a skeleton crew but my main focus in RL will be finding a job. Hope everyone understands. Man...wish I had a warm belly to slide into sometimes to disappear from this stress, lol.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Fri Dec 26, 2014 4:40 pm

we know you are busy.....any inspiration lately??? :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue Dec 30, 2014 4:26 pm

bradlax16 wrote:we know you are busy.....any inspiration lately??? :)


Sorry, not as of yet. I just don't have time right now :(
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Wed Feb 25, 2015 3:13 am

Zombie... we miss you. I had to bump this thread, its been almost 2 months! The horror... the horror... 8O
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed Feb 25, 2015 10:11 am

theheadsn wrote:Zombie... we miss you. I had to bump this thread, its been almost 2 months! The horror... the horror... 8O


;) Well, things have been looking up lately. I found a new job, which really relieves a lot of stress. I have had no time to write, however I did find an incomplete story from well over a year ago that I did managed to finish. I'm hoping to post it soon after I read through for blatant errors. Hang in there.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Tsubasa17 » Mon Mar 02, 2015 5:49 am

Zombie!! Unless I missed it, did you ever finish and post part three of The Bet and Deeper?
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Mon Mar 02, 2015 5:59 pm

Tsubasa17 wrote:Zombie!! Unless I missed it, did you ever finish and post part three of The Bet and Deeper?


:( No I never did finish that one.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Mon Mar 02, 2015 9:48 pm

we'll take anything at this point! neeeeeed more of your stories haha it's been so long :silly:
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Tsubasa17 » Fri Apr 10, 2015 5:21 pm

we need moar!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:45 pm

:zombie: we :zombie: need :zombie: you :zombie:

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Sun Apr 12, 2015 8:54 am

theheadsn wrote::zombie: we :zombie: need :zombie: you :zombie:

:D


I second this, we know you're busy but it's been sooooo long....maybe to hold us over you could dump any old stories that you have done but just didn't post, finished or unfinished?
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