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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sat Apr 20, 2013 10:15 pm

Monkeyboi111 wrote:I like the Helford House story quite a bit. I like creature vs women stories, and I like digestion in vore. You nailed both, and it was well written. Looking forward to more works, cheers!


Thank you very much!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sat Apr 20, 2013 10:18 pm

Day at the Beach (F/F, full size) - Melody hasn't fed in weeks and she can't wait until the end of the photo-shoot to make a snack out of a couple of swimsuit models.

WARNING: Nudity and some brief sexual content.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby LazySWV » Sat Apr 27, 2013 10:55 am

I feel bad that this story was posted a week ago and hasn't gotten any replies. I honestly check here every day to see if you've made any new content, but this story wasn't my thing with the same size vore. When Melody drugged the water, I was surprised that it wasn't a shrinking potion :-D

The story was well written as always, but although I'm really into vore, I have trouble imagining a giant unhinged jaw and then someone's ridiculously swollen belly to be sexy. (perhaps creepy?) Clearly you're having fun experimenting though, so don't let anyone else's tastes stop you! By the way, what happened to that long story you were working on? You mentioned someone "evil" and deserving of getting eaten getting worked into it somewhere and I'm curious what you came up with :)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby blackskies » Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:36 pm

I felt the same way about this story. I liked the writing style used but I'm not really into same size vore when it comes to one human consuming another.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Luckless » Sat Apr 27, 2013 2:04 pm

I concur with the before mentioned things. I'm looking for micros being ingested.
Now, what my love is, proof hath made you know;
And as my love is sized, my fear is so:
Where love is great, the littlest doubts are fear;
Where little fears grow great, great love grows there.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Sat Apr 27, 2013 2:05 pm

Same size is just as good as micro for me, so I like it.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sun Apr 28, 2013 2:37 am

dave102938 wrote:I feel bad that this story was posted a week ago and hasn't gotten any replies. I honestly check here every day to see if you've made any new content, but this story wasn't my thing with the same size vore. When Melody drugged the water, I was surprised that it wasn't a shrinking potion :-D

The story was well written as always, but although I'm really into vore, I have trouble imagining a giant unhinged jaw and then someone's ridiculously swollen belly to be sexy. (perhaps creepy?) Clearly you're having fun experimenting though, so don't let anyone else's tastes stop you! By the way, what happened to that long story you were working on? You mentioned someone "evil" and deserving of getting eaten getting worked into it somewhere and I'm curious what you came up with :)


That's cool, I appreciate the feedback. I do like to experiment with same size vore now and then. I know that trying to imagine an unhinged jaw and swollen belly is pretty ridiculous but I consider it a challenge to make an attempt at it. The eroticism for me doesn't come from the physical features (like the swollen belly) but from the dialog, thoughts, and attitude of the predator stalking her prey.

The long story is still pending. Hopefully I will finish it one day.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Sat May 04, 2013 1:03 am

Working on new stories, but also had a chance to revise some old ones that I never got around to finish. Here's one of them.

The New Giantess in Town (F/F) - Three women, lounging in the penthouse pool on the roof of a luxurious hotel are stunned to see a giantess walk into town. Their fascination turns to horror when they find out the giant woman is hungry.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Sat May 04, 2013 7:48 pm

Nice. Loved the older predator and multiple prey. I would have liked to see more dialogue between the giantess and her dinner though.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Mon May 06, 2013 1:16 am

A true master piece as always.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Mon May 06, 2013 2:42 pm

i hope this thread never dies holy shit these are good
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby voreguy » Tue May 07, 2013 4:31 pm

That story was just fantastic, dude!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Cuddlekins » Tue May 07, 2013 6:15 pm

Yes, I did read through it and I did like it a lot o: Nice buildup and the descriptions and great as always :3
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby supernova » Thu May 09, 2013 12:36 am

These stories always take a few days for me to finish ;)

But that's just a testament to your amazing writing, ZS! Keep it up, we truly appreciate it!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Thu May 09, 2013 11:42 pm

Thanks so much for the comments! You all deserve another story. I'll post one soon, trololo. ;) In a few days-I'm away from my computer right now.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Tue May 14, 2013 9:09 am

new storyyyyyy PLEASE
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue May 14, 2013 11:21 am

I'll try my best to post one this evening. Don't know what time that will be for those of you around the world but it'll be about 8 hours from now.

Actually, anyone mind posting where they're from? Might be fun to see where we are in the world. You don't have to be too specific.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby walkingdude225 » Tue May 14, 2013 11:34 am

I am from the firelands of northeast ohio
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby supernova » Tue May 14, 2013 11:36 am

New York!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Tue May 14, 2013 11:50 am

I'm in Missouri, near banks of the mighty Mississippi River.

BTW, in case anyone was wondering, the reason I don't post anything right now is because I'm at work and I don't want to pull up Eka's on my work computer. The I.T. guys are always watching. :|. So I have to sit and tap on my smartphone.
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