Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

[Zombie_Slave]

"After the party" is my new favorite. Love it when a girl is full after eating multiple people.

Wow, thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.

[Zombie_Slave]

loved both of them Zombie a throw back to your older stories, yay! I actually liked the hard vore version of sandwich mix up more than the soft, oddly enough ha I think because it wasn't super detailed and it cut to the point of view of the predator over the prey, which is always a nice touch. Unexpected vore is awesome, and I loved that the point of view wasn't from the prey the whole time, awesome work.
After the party was very cool, I loved how even when she was inserted she could kind of hear the people in the stomach, very grim, very sexy. The ending I honestly wasn't expecting, kind of a happy ending? I guess lol either way it was a great read. Cant wait to read more, keep it up!

I liked the hard vore version of the sandwich story better too. I think I may have figured out how to do hard vore without being exceptionally graphic. Kind of just saying it happened, without describing the gory details gets the point across I think. I think I was pushing things a bit, having Cheyanne eat the sandwich and tasting something strange in there, but not actually checking to see what it was. A little unbelievable but eh, whatever. And I really enjoyed writing from both pred and prey points of view, hence the chapter breaks. I like to stick with one point of view per section and keep switching rather than try to write an omniscient point of view in all the characters heads at once.

I'm glad you liked After the Party as well. For me,that story is all about the humiliation of being inserted in another person's nether-regions. But I'm glad people seem to like the vorish aspects of the story as well.

[Electricwestern]

I really liked both of the new ones, particularly the mass-vore in the first and the perspective swap in the second. Good stuff!

[Zombie_Slave]

I really liked both of the new ones, particularly the mass-vore in the first and the perspective swap in the second. Good stuff!

Thank you!

[Zombie_Slave]

Wow, I just wrote a story with a really, really sadistic pred. I surprised even myself.

...and here it is.

Getting Rid of Mean Girls is Easy (F/f/f/f/f, sadistic pred, cruel, 1 hard vore, 3 soft) - Tired of the mean girls on campus, Miranda turns her darker side on the girls she hates.

Used a bit more foul language than usual so just be warned.

[bradlax16]

i liked this one a lot, loved how sadistic the pred was, and loved how she told her prey that she thinks being swallowed alive is worse than being chewed....because it obviously is ...also loved the digestion scene, nice work, i almost felt their fear reading it

[bradlax16]

the more unwilling the prey the better, and this prey was obviously very unwilling

[Electricwestern]

This one was really good, liked the pred a lot! Awesome work, keep it up.

[Zombie_Slave]

i liked this one a lot, loved how sadistic the pred was, and loved how she told her prey that she thinks being swallowed alive is worse than being chewed....because it obviously is ...also loved the digestion scene, nice work, i almost felt their fear reading it

Thanks so much!

[Zombie_Slave]

This one was really good, liked the pred a lot! Awesome work, keep it up.

Thank you!

[Zombie_Slave]

Dolly Girl (F/f) - Tricia Higgins hires a shrunken woman to be her daughter's "living doll". But Tricia develops a strange obsession with the tiny woman...

[mojo-2131285]

The new one's really well written. You're on a roll lately.

[bradlax16]

The new one's really well written. You're on a roll lately.

i couldn't agree more, you are on a roll! these new stories are very fresh and I am absolutely loving it

[bradlax16]

anything new in the works?

[Scrumptious]

The story is absolutely superb. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I did encounter what must have been a typo

“Hey what are you doing?” Tricia said as her body was carried toward the plush, maroon colored lips of her employer. “Stop it! STOP!”

I'm guessing this was supposed to be Sarah, rather than Tricia.

[Zombie_Slave]

The new one's really well written. You're on a roll lately.

Thank you!

[Zombie_Slave]

anything new in the works?

Well, not at the moment. However, I was toying with the idea of having Tricia from my latest story order some more doll-women

[Zombie_Slave]

The story is absolutely superb. Thanks for writing and sharing.

I did encounter what must have been a typo

“Hey what are you doing?” Tricia said as her body was carried toward the plush, maroon colored lips of her employer. “Stop it! STOP!”

I'm guessing this was supposed to be Sarah, rather than Tricia.

Thank you so much! This is why you shouldn't try to edit stories after you've had several adult beverages if you know what I mean It's embarrassing though. I try to catch the bad mistakes like that

[rugli]

Are you planning to write any more same-size stories ?

[Cuddlekins]

I got a bit of enjoyment from the last one. I mean, the idea of this woman feeling the urge to just up and eat her out of nowhere was a bit far-fetched, but I can't say I haven't done the same thing in stories. :V Prolly not the best habit, but sometimes, I just gotta write some short shallow piece like that, lol.