Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)

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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby observer » Wed May 29, 2013 5:19 pm

C, personally hoping at least one of the shrunk girls ends up in their drunk friend.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Survivor » Wed May 29, 2013 5:32 pm

A, D, C, B, in that order.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Ty975 » Wed May 29, 2013 6:15 pm

D for sure
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Milliways » Wed May 29, 2013 7:03 pm

DDDDDDDDDD
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Wed May 29, 2013 7:19 pm

I guess I'm the only one who's intrigued by B
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Heartless » Wed May 29, 2013 8:12 pm

i vote B as well. that one sounds the most intersting
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Wed May 29, 2013 9:15 pm

Okay I'm going with story D! Votes were really close though. As to those who liked B, don't despair, it is a really interesting premise and I'll post it soon.

Awakening Her Oral Fetish (F/f, mouthplay, vore, gentle) - Poor Dawn is living life as a shrunken sorority sister after a crazy chemical accident altered her size. During a crazy party, she's about to find out she has certain...desires that she never knew about before.

Warning: mild sexual content.

This story was really fun to write and really showcases how much I love female mouths. :-D
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Chaos » Wed May 29, 2013 9:43 pm

I know I voted for A, but Awakening Her Oral Fetish was fantastic. I think it was one of your best stories yet, mixing the excitement of vore with lots of sexual emotions. I got so much enjoyment seeing Dawn get off and reading about Monica playing with her. I'd love to read more about the shrunken sorority sister and exploring her oral fixation.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Wed May 29, 2013 10:33 pm

damn I hate stories where the swallowed victim isn't digested what's the fun in that ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby PocketHero » Thu May 30, 2013 2:05 pm

Awakening Her Oral Fetish was epic. I don't think I'll ever grow tired of your stories, Zombie Slave!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Thu May 30, 2013 2:37 pm

good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing :) so keep it coming
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Wolfsage » Thu May 30, 2013 3:05 pm

bradlax16 wrote:damn I hate stories where the swallowed victim isn't digested what's the fun in that ;)

That's the best part of it, this is fantafy so things that seems impossible is possible, and that's the fun in it, we need more like that.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Hiddenlurker » Thu May 30, 2013 4:11 pm

If voting is still available: A and then maybe C.

Love your stories mate.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Thu May 30, 2013 4:29 pm

Hiddenlurker wrote:If voting is still available: A and then maybe C.

Love your stories mate.


Sure. Those stories are done, they just need to be edited for errors.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Zombie_Slave » Thu May 30, 2013 4:30 pm

theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing :) so keep it coming


What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you? ;)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby mojo-2131285 » Thu May 30, 2013 4:41 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:
theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing :) so keep it coming


What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you? ;)


All hot girls must be digested by other hot girls until there is only one supremely hot chick who we can all worship! Like Highlander...sort of.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby bradlax16 » Thu May 30, 2013 5:21 pm

C then B then A
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby theheadsn » Thu May 30, 2013 9:44 pm

Zombie_Slave wrote:
theheadsn wrote:good story, ending was kinda not my thing. But anything u put out is better than nothing :) so keep it coming


What about the ending wasn't your thing? Just curious. You didn't want the poor girl to be digested did you? ;)


Not really sure honestly, not sure if its just me or what. I've noticed though your tone in the stories has changed a bit. At least from your stories about a year or so ago. Not saying its a bad thing, I've just picked up on it more I guess because I loved your older stories so much
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby Krauser » Fri May 31, 2013 3:43 am

I would LOVE to see C. I missed the initial vote, so thats what mine would have been.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories

Postby sabrina_diamond » Fri May 31, 2013 4:03 am

Could you write a story involving a doctor and his patient?
*Chomp, slideee, gurgle gurgle* Must have ate something off! *screaming*
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