Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Her Walk on the Beach (F/f) - When Lauren took a walk on a deserted beach she never imagined she'd meet a giantess...especially not a hungry one.
I wrote this story several months ago; sorry it took me so long to post it.
I wrote this story several months ago; sorry it took me so long to post it.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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A simple story, but satisfying. I do like how she toyed with her prey. I liked it a lot. o:
***Cuddlekins Vore Stories (May contain LOLI)
***FF14 GPose Vore Comics
(Mostly macro/micro F/f, some ?/F, some monster girl same-size.)
***FF14 GPose Vore Comics
(Mostly macro/micro F/f, some ?/F, some monster girl same-size.)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Simple; yet,brilliant, I wish I could be half the writer you are.
I met the Walkin Dude, religous, in his worn down cowboy boots <br>He walked like no man on earth <br>I swear he had no name, I swear he had no name <br>....The Alarm
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walkingdude225 - Been posting for a bit
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Thanks for the update! Not a huge fan of the willingness she showed, but great writing none-the-less!
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I really like this story. Simple and to the point, without rushing it! Great read, well done.
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Cuddlekins wrote:A simple story, but satisfying. I do like how she toyed with her prey. I liked it a lot. o:
Thanks!
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walkingdude225 wrote:Simple; yet,brilliant, I wish I could be half the writer you are.
Thank you. And it just takes practice to improve with writing
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Lupe wrote:Thanks for the update! Not a huge fan of the willingness she showed, but great writing none-the-less!
The willingness at the end really kind of bugged me. I tried to show that she really had no option but to give in to the giantess. However, in a "real" situation, I don't think a person would ever stop fighting to escape. Thanks for reading.
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TheWiking2000 wrote:I really like this story. Simple and to the point, without rushing it! Great read, well done.
Thank you. I've been trying to keep things simple lately. Thanks for reading.
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12 inches of snow and a high temp of zero degrees Fahrenheit today...I wish I had a nice warm mouth to climb into.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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We have at least that much here, and our wind chill is -44.
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Zombie_Slave wrote:Her Walk on the Beach (F/f) - When Lauren took a walk on a deserted beach she never imagined she'd meet a giantess...especially not a hungry one.
I wrote this story several months ago; sorry it took me so long to post it.
i really enjoyed this story it was classic ZS....just pure, awesome soft vore, reminded me of your earlier work
any new stories in the works?
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It's cold and snowy here, too. My feet got all numb trying to shovel :c Ah well, it's warm inside in front of a good story. Good time for me to read and write, I'd say, and I'm going to seize on it.
***Cuddlekins Vore Stories (May contain LOLI)
***FF14 GPose Vore Comics
(Mostly macro/micro F/f, some ?/F, some monster girl same-size.)
***FF14 GPose Vore Comics
(Mostly macro/micro F/f, some ?/F, some monster girl same-size.)
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I'd love to see another story involving a girl getting revenge on bullies, by swallowing them alive of course....much like "revenge of the tormented"....it's like the worst revenge ever
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Hi all. I'll be on hiatus for a while so no new stories anytime soon. I have some things to take care of in RL but hope to be back.
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It's okay, take all the time you need. Life is more important than silly fiction. Just handle what you need to get done. We will still be here when you're ready.
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come back to us ZS!
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blackskies wrote:come back to us ZS!
::pokes head in:: Hello? Whaz uuuup?
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Oh no, ZS has been infected by the last millennium!
Hope all's well with you, mate
Hope all's well with you, mate
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