Zombie Slave's Vore Stories (update 04-23-2015)
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Can't wait for the new story now! It sounds like it will be a vore story of epic proportions! And about the most recent story, you never fail to please with your works ZS I can't imagine you'd start now. Unfortunately I'm WAY too tired to read it right now, so a review will have to come later on it from me.
Thanks for everything you contribute to this site and all other sites you're involved with (I only know of this one and the giantesscity site) you always make some of the best work on them!
Thanks for everything you contribute to this site and all other sites you're involved with (I only know of this one and the giantesscity site) you always make some of the best work on them!
I keep trying to add my signature here but the only thing I've done is put ink all over my screen.
I am mediocrities, an average person of mediocre acres.
I am mediocrities, an average person of mediocre acres.
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nooneudknow - Intermediate Vorarephile
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
excellent stories
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Zombie_Slave wrote:Well I started with this mother/daughter thing because I wanted a close relationship between the two main characters, but I was becoming frustrated writing scenes where I kept thinking, ya know a real "mother" would never act this way. Plus, spoiler alert, in part 2 of the story I start adding in some other giantess fetishes...ahem...insertion, things like that. (you know how descriptive I get with mouths? hope your ready for some other locations) I wanted to go all out and do some things I haven't done before, and as I wrote the scenes it became creepier and creepier to have this "mom" character starting to do more and more sexual things. It just doesn't feel right anymore to have the mother/daughter dynamic. Don't be disappointed. I'll make it worth your while I think.
You could go the stepdaughter/stepmother route. So atleast then you would have some basis for the sexual contact no being so weird, and the loving part turning sour. Just an idea ha
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
I am still in love with your work, and I eagerly await your next story. Any progress updates?
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Electricwestern wrote:I am still in love with your work, and I eagerly await your next story. Any progress updates?
Sorry, not much progress since I wrote The Jogger. Things were very hectic and stressful (at my RL job) over the holidays so I didn't do any writing.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Tanya's Breakfast - Tanya is just your typical everyday college student...or is she? Turns out she has a bit of a secret--she likes to shrink people--and devour them whole!
This is a rare story where I don't tell it from the point of view of the person being eaten. Check it out and let me know what you think!
This is a rare story where I don't tell it from the point of view of the person being eaten. Check it out and let me know what you think!
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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Hmm, excellent bordering on fantastic, as always. Was hoping for something with pancakes, since you said breakfast, and I don't remember you ever doing one like them before. Nice ending too. Not often you do an ending like that.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Great work, its good to get new material from you as always be it a manip or story!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Thanks Star_Sage, thanks Krauser.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Looking for feedback on this new one...
Getting to Know Her (F/F, vore, WARNING: sexual content, insertion) Alison is concerned her roommate is hiding something. Suspecting drugs, she makes a quick search of their room and is amazed to find a hidden box of shrunken people. Things take a turn for the worse as Alison tries to use the shrink-gun she finds to rescue the shrunken people...just as her roommate returns.
Getting to Know Her (F/F, vore, WARNING: sexual content, insertion) Alison is concerned her roommate is hiding something. Suspecting drugs, she makes a quick search of their room and is amazed to find a hidden box of shrunken people. Things take a turn for the worse as Alison tries to use the shrink-gun she finds to rescue the shrunken people...just as her roommate returns.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Another excellent story, I enjoyed this one quite a bit.
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Really liked this one. It's my favorite since "Secret Agent Meals."
AD SIDERA!!!
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
yes very cool its like a broken record having to say over and over again how awesome your stuff is
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
These are my favorite kinds of stories from you. Good ol' college or high school girls with a secret desire to devour other girls... I've literally never found anyone even half as talented as you are at writing these.
You write amazing sadistic preds, I love the way they taunt their meals before swallowing them down. If I had to complain about one thing is that I wish the preds would tease about the aftermath of the vore more often (like bit about finding bones in the toilet the next day in 'Laura's Secret') because for me that's the most humiliating aspect of being vored, and what I like about vore is the complete domination of pred over prey.
But that's really just a personal thing, I can't expect to find stories catered completely to my tastes.
Anyway, amazing work as always, hope to see more stories like this from you.
You write amazing sadistic preds, I love the way they taunt their meals before swallowing them down. If I had to complain about one thing is that I wish the preds would tease about the aftermath of the vore more often (like bit about finding bones in the toilet the next day in 'Laura's Secret') because for me that's the most humiliating aspect of being vored, and what I like about vore is the complete domination of pred over prey.
But that's really just a personal thing, I can't expect to find stories catered completely to my tastes.
Anyway, amazing work as always, hope to see more stories like this from you.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
That was possibly the best vore story I ever read. I can't believe you do insertion, too. It's as if we both have the same exact fetish. Odd, how that works. Keep up the amazing work.
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
Electricwestern wrote:Another excellent story, I enjoyed this one quite a bit.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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mojo-2131285 wrote:Really liked this one. It's my favorite since "Secret Agent Meals."
Sweet, thanks!
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theheadsn wrote:yes very cool its like a broken record having to say over and over again how awesome your stuff is
Thanks, appreciate the feedback.
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Zombie_Slave - Advanced Vorarephile
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Re: Zombie Slave's Vore Stories
observer wrote:These are my favorite kinds of stories from you. Good ol' college or high school girls with a secret desire to devour other girls... I've literally never found anyone even half as talented as you are at writing these.
You write amazing sadistic preds, I love the way they taunt their meals before swallowing them down. If I had to complain about one thing is that I wish the preds would tease about the aftermath of the vore more often (like bit about finding bones in the toilet the next day in 'Laura's Secret') because for me that's the most humiliating aspect of being vored, and what I like about vore is the complete domination of pred over prey.
But that's really just a personal thing, I can't expect to find stories catered completely to my tastes.
Anyway, amazing work as always, hope to see more stories like this from you.
Yeah I tend to stick to the college age girls since that was the period of time in my life when I discovered other people had the vore fetish like I do. Plus it's super easy to write younger people because they aren't quite mature enough to realize what they're doing, at least in a fantasy setting.
You know I don't really set out to write sadistic pred. I just start typing and whatever happens...well, happens. Does that make sense? It seems like anyone who would treat tiny people the way my preds do would have to be sadistic on some level, that's why they never let the victims back out again once swallowed.In this particular story I fully intended Alison to make it through the ordeal alive, to be left in the box as a shrunken pet. Well, as I was typing Sarah decided to do something different. It seems she was still hungry and, well, you read what happened. That's part of the fun in writing. Sometimes the story just goes in a different direction than you envisioned.
Thanks for the comments!
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