Hello ever one. This is my first story that i finish and now am sorry with you all here. Mind you I'm going to make it in parts so for now I'm Giving you the start of it all. When i get the next part done i will post it up. Now as the Title says this is a Fallout based Story. Now all the characters of made up by me. I hope some fans will catch a few hidden things i will be putting in each part of the story as a little easter egg like thing. Hope you enjoy that treat. Now here is the first part of the story hope to have the next out soon.
The wasteland was rather buzzing these days with news of the war over the dam spreading and fresh water coming from the capital. None was more busy then a small town just starting off along a long streach of unmarked road.The town was called Little Haven, but lets call it Haven for short. Haven had only a few make shift buildings and homes, but was a good place to rest for those making a trip to and from places all over the wasteland. The most stopped place in town was its own home made hotel. It wasn't much to look at with all the pieces of steel and makeshift building supplies that was used, but it was a safe place to rest for the night, plus the bar inside wasn't bad either. Life was great in haven compared to most other towns in the wasteland. Didn't even seem to have any problems with raiders as well. But haven didn't have any signs of law or protection to make it seem to safe. Why that was was because of one of the residants staying within Haven. Now you might think it may be some old Brotherhood of Steel member gone soft or some kind hearted Super mutant, but you will be surprised.
It was a Deathclaw. One of the most feared creatures in the Wasteland. Who could talk. Her name was
Fay. Now You might look at a deathclaw and see it nothing but a beast thats about to rip your head off but Fay isn't a normal deathclaw. She was one of those Rare deathclaws that came from Vault 13 after the enclave made them smarter. But those who knew of this vault also found out that they all were killed. So how did Fay even survive then well thats where our story begins.
When Frank Horrigan came knocking at vault 13. It was known that they were going to die by the hands of this most deadly being to have roamed the wasteland at the time. So one of the females who were caring for the eggs was trying to save at least some of the next batch of kids. The unaware Frank killed all of the deathclaws and eggs besides Three that were hidden away. After some time a Wander who was looking for an easy picking in the vault came to find the empty vault. He had an old beat up pip boy around his arm to help him keep a log and get into the computers within the vault. He stepped through the open vault dear wearing what seemed like a make shift suit of power armor. It had an old Brotherhood of Steel symbol on it but the way the armor looked showed that he didn't seem like a normal Brotherhood member. He had a Laser rilfe strapped onto his back. He pulled it from the holster and ready it as he started to look around at the entracne of the Vault. He started to walk along to begin to look for anything worth the trip. He soon came onto the first of the deathclaw corpses. He kneeled down at it to begin to look over the wounds of the beast. He first thought it might have been from a fellow deathclaw and though the place was a nest, but closer look at the wounds showed it wasn't a normal wound a deathclaw might have made. He soon heard some noise that cought him a bit jumpy and stood up at the ready for battle. Soon enough he heard a strange voice coming out from from behind a computer pannel near by. When he moved his Laser rifle into veiw of the consul he was met with a small shadow poking out from the side of it staring to him. He could see the red eyes staring at him even in the darkness of the vault. He kept his sights set on the figure while it just stood there. It made another sound a bit more like a word saying out. "H...hello." He was a bit puzzled by this and slightly lowered his rifle. Just as that happen he found his feet knocked out from under him and fell to the ground. As he started to open his eyes after cringing from the landing he found a small Deathclaw ontop of him. It let out a bit of a roar at him and kept its claws close to his neck. He was waiting for it to end him but was surprised when it just made sure he stayed on the ground. Soon enough he heard the sound of his rilfe being picked up. When he looked over he could see another small deathclaw picking up the rilfe and taking it away from him. The deathclaw that had his weapon was moving over towards the shadowy figure that was behind the pannel. He asumed it to was a yound deathclaw as well with what he can hardly make of the figure. His gaze soon returned to the one ontop of him. It was letting out a low growl at him the whole time. Soon one of the other two deathclaws spoke out saying. "He is harmless now." The one ontop of the wander spoke out in respance. "Fine but he should leave." The wander was rather shocked at all of this. He thought he was about to die but instead these deathclaws of all things are letting him go and was talking at that. He begain to slowly rise up a bit. He held himself up with his arms pressing on the ground under him to keep him up. He was stunned as he stared at all three of the deathclaw young. There was the one ontop of him that seemed bigger then the rest. The one holding his rilfe which was a bit smaller then the first. The last one that was hidding behind the pannel was also the smallest of the three. He slowly begin to stand up to his feet staring at all three of them. He was a bit speechless but soon began to speak out. "Hello there." The first two were silient to him but the third and smallest spoke out first to him. "Hello to you." He brought his hand up to his mouth as he cleared his voice once more. At the same time the two bigger young child like size deathclaws where glaring at the littler one like it did something wrong. But the wander would soon speak out once more. "I thank you for not killing me but may i have my rifle back?" The first deathclaw spoke out saying with a rather fierce tone in its voice. "And let you kill us all. No I think not." The littest of them then stepped forward and spoke out to the bigger one. "But he could have killed me when he first saw me, but he didn't do it. Surely he is a good person." The bigger one soon snorted and moved its head as gester to tell the one holding the rilfe to give it back to the male. So it did so by sliding it back to him at his feet. He took his rifle back and put it back onto his back. He was curious about theseyoung deathclaws and seemed a bit pitty with them not having anyone else around to help them grow up. So he asked them saying. "Do you have names? Is it just you three here? What happen to the others?" He was full of questions and the littlest of them was full of answers. it spoke out once again to be the only one wantting to speak with him. "The biggest one and my brother is called Togar. This is my Sister Cera. I am Fay. Sorry about what Togar did he was only keeping us safe. We don't know what happen to the rest. We were the only one alive when we came out of our eggs and Togar has been keeping us safe since." Togar then made another snort as he turned his head from the visiter. Cera was rather quiet the whole time. Like she couldn't speak at all or didn't want to. Fay spoke out asking. "And your Name?" The wander would say as a reply. "Well People call me Jury as a nickname for i can Juryrig just about anything, but my real name is Magnus. Nice to meet you three." Fay would begin to walk forward and reach its claws out towards Magnus. He would then lower his right hand down to grab a hold gently of his claws to shake them. Fay seemed happy to meet him by what he could tell of the look on her face. Cera seemed to show the same look but Togar just kept his nose held up and away from him. Magnus would speak out to them all saying. "Hey why don't you come with me while i travel. Its better then remaining here and being around these corpses of your family.? I could teach and help you live outside and stay safe as well." Fay seemed trailed to hear this having always wanted to go outside and see the world outside of the vault and wanted to jump at the chance. Cera was no two ways about it either and stepped closer to fay to show she was willing to go as well. Togar had move himself down a bit lower and closer towards Fay to ask her. "Are you sure about this Fay?" She would nod to him and say. "Yes I am. I want to see the outside world and explore."
Togar begin to stood back up right and say as well. "Well then I will be going along as well to keep you two safe." He turned his gaze towards Magnus with a bit of a snarl and moved along towards to other two. With that Magnus would move along towards the door to the vault and wave his hand along for them two to follow. They would all move along together as they begin to exit the only home they have known for their whole lifes and now step out into the world.
A ghoul would slam down a empty glass onto the counter of the bar as he turns towards a random group of travels next to him that seem as if they have been listening to him speak. He speaks out saying. "Well thats the end of our story for now." Another drink would move along the bar to the ghoul. The ghoul would smile a bit and grab the drink to drink it down. once he put the glass down he would speak out saying. "Well guess i could tell you another part."
Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways.
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
I'm glad to see so many interested in this story. Well I plan on finishing the next part by tonight hopefully.
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Titus Braovdo - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
Dun dun DUUUUUN some eggs survived x3
Funny the remaining guys never noticed that or the albino deathclaw o-o
*shoves another glass to the ghoul* dont you dare to get drunk and pass out <_<
Funny the remaining guys never noticed that or the albino deathclaw o-o
*shoves another glass to the ghoul* dont you dare to get drunk and pass out <_<
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
Im trying to remember all my facts on it. I was little when i played them. I forgot even what the master looked like.
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Titus Braovdo - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
i got both games for free from gog XD also the intelligent deathclaws were in fallout 2 n.n
if you get their GECK they get killed by that supermutant in the powerarmor ._. only 2 survive the albino deathclaw that can be a companion and one deathclaw in an enclave outpost that you can rescue
if you get their GECK they get killed by that supermutant in the powerarmor ._. only 2 survive the albino deathclaw that can be a companion and one deathclaw in an enclave outpost that you can rescue
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Amnael - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
Thanks. Might just add something more to the story now. Got to rewrite a few parts now but thats part of the fun. I remember the mutant to he was Frank as i put it in the story. I do need to replay them tho.
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Titus Braovdo - Somewhat familiar
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Re: Fallout Deathclaws Take the Wasteland In unexpected ways
You can also look through Walkthroughs on Fallout 2 Wiki´s they also give storybackgrounds and hints to where names and stuff come from x3
Even though the producers were quite jerks ... if i remember right they said in an interview the inteligent deathclaw went extinct because neither of the 2 surviving would ever reproduce ... and even if they did only normal deathclaws would arise. <_< they should be feed to one x3
Even though the producers were quite jerks ... if i remember right they said in an interview the inteligent deathclaw went extinct because neither of the 2 surviving would ever reproduce ... and even if they did only normal deathclaws would arise. <_< they should be feed to one x3
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