Tetsusaiga wrote:And just for the hell of it, here is my recent Princess Peach story. I'm a better writer than artist... but what do I know?
You dehumanized Peach. Not really a problem I have with your story it just reads off like this:
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"OH I'm so suddenly hungry for no reason at all, oh I think I'll just go and eat something from the fridge, the only fridgerator I have in this enormous palace that I live in."
"Oh shucks there is no food, I guess I'll have to eat someone."
"Uww! My cousin looks nice. Her tight body is turning me lesbian, but I can't have sex with her. I've to eat her!"
"Even though she's my best friend and my cousin, and I'll have no friends once doing this act and live alone throughout the rest of my life. Therefore making it a likely chance I'll turn suicidal to escape my tormenting existence, I'll do it anyways. Because I'm just that damn hungry."
"Mmm Human flesh, boy does it taste so good and yet I'll get nothing from digesting her except a lot of free agent proteins that will give me something mad cow disease. Isn't cannibalism, wonderful?"
"Now after the Isis sets in I can digest this huge amount of mass in an incredibly fast amount of time and disregarding the fact the amount of acid it would take to digest her should also digest myself from the inside. Oh fuck the laws of physics, I'm the princess."
"Oh! Ah what a wonderful morning! That sure hit the spot. Now that I'll be alone throughout the rest of my life unless I come across other princesses. But I'll end up devouring them and therefore ultimately live alone by myself. It is also such a shame that none of the good times I've had with my cousin are making me regret my own actions and her death. Normally I would or should weep over such an occasion. Sure does suck lacking a conscience. Time to go emo, hey Shadow can I borrow your gun?"
The end.
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Now don't get me wrong. The idea of Peach eating Daisy is quite sexually exciting for me, but once digestion gets involved especially when it isn't explained, I get completely turned off.