My Naruto unbirth/swap story

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My Naruto unbirth/swap story

Postby Jotaro92 » Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:54 pm

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Re: My Naruto unbirth/swap story

Postby LillyBells » Thu Aug 28, 2014 11:33 am

Don't get me wrong, the story itself is good. But you need to get a MUCH better translation, i'd recommend looking for someone that can type english very well, so he/she can translate this. Crappy translations ruin the fun for alot of people, this story has great potential, good job. Just get it properly translated.
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Re: My Naruto unbirth/swap story

Postby Jotaro92 » Thu Aug 28, 2014 3:02 pm

No problem, I have not misunderstood, I know that my English is bad XD
I may have found a user who will give me a hand with translations
I know how to continue the story, I hope to continue with the help of this person
However, grazie mille per aver letto :)
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Re: My Naruto unbirth/swap story

Postby Jotaro92 » Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:59 pm

I ask to the staff to close this topic because I'm going to post this story with a better english thanks to a hand from another user.
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Re: My Naruto unbirth/swap story

Postby LillyBells » Sat Sep 06, 2014 9:51 am

Sounds good c:
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