Unbirth Story I wrote Aunt unbirths

[Strange]

as with any horrible day mine started like a normal one, don't be such a baby you might say people have had worse days you might comment well I bet none of their was like mine because mine wasn't a normal day. My name is Ashten I am Thirteen years old you don't really need to know much more about me other than the fact that I am just a normal teen you know loud music sneaking porn videos on my computer eating tons of junk food and drinks ect.
The story begins when my mom had to go to a business meeting outside the u.s. whatever it was it was hush hush and she couldn't tell anyone not that I cared I was just glad she was leaving i'm thirteen and so I bet I can stay home alone she will only be gone for a week after all. I was sadly mistaken she didn't trust me by myself and called me aunt to baby sit me, My aunt is cool but she has this bad habit of buying strange things from strange people.

My aunt rushed over as she lives nearby at least a 20 minute drive she came to the door as my mom was leaving she was running late and had to hurry she only got the chance to say thank you very quickly to my aunt and drove off speeding actually. My aunt is one to marvel at she got the looks mom got the maturity her name is Ariel she has reddish brown hair has a slick and tan body green eyes soft and kissable lips and her boobs are the perfect size not to big not to small but perfectly balanced and round. as we did our greetings she pulled out a bottle of soda or at least that's what I thought later I would find out not everything is as it appears. She set it down on the kitchen table saying it's not for me and don't drink it then she said she is going to lay down for a bit (which I knew she meant masturbate i'm not an idiot)

I knew she would be a while and to distracted to keep an eye on me so soon after she went to my moms bedroom leaving it wide open which was a dumb thing to do (as I said mom got the maturity and the brains apparently) I gulped down the bottle it tasted good but unique it clearly wasn't soda but it tasted amazing all the same. but soon I felt dizzy and tingly I feared I had just drunk some very strong alcohol but then saw everything getting bigger but I was actually getting smaller. I became the size of a barbie doll and was freaking out so much so that I wasn't paying attention as I ran around shouting for aunt Ariel to help me. I hit something that made me launch in the air I had no idea what it was as I was to busy freaking out we had the fan on high and I barely escaped death as I land on one of the fan blades instead of being hit with it the speed was so fast and I flew in the direction of my mom's bedroom like a speeding bullet the only thing I was able to see was my aunts Vagina.

not even wet yet no hairs and looked like plump lips before I could say anything I was shot inside her barely half my body was inside and I heard her gasp from pleasure at the same time. my head inside I saw her walls they were soft and pink slightly slimy and moving slightly when suddenly I felt her pull me out with more groans of pleasure. pulling me to her (aunt Ariel) didn't I say that wasn't for you? ( me) I'm sorry but you gotta change me back somehow!) ) Aunt Ariel) sadly I don't have a cure but you sure speed into my velvet hole eagerly didn't you? (me) no I was shot into you from the ceiling fan it was horrible! (shhh... you don't have to lie your thirteen and curious if you wanted to see what the vagina looks like all you had to do was ask.

She said this with a creepy and hungry smile and she slowly lowered me to her vagina despite my screaming and pleading, this time my feet went first and she shove me in while sucking me in as well it was like the vagina was eating me like a human mouth it made squishy sounds and kept pulling me in it was really warm inside and kind of moist, my aunt enjoying every second of it moaning gasping she was sweating and began to hungrily pull me in faster to the point where only my head was not in. stopping she said to me take one last look at the world sweety your going to your new home♥I gave one last plea and then I was devoured. Inside it was like a soft pink tunnel that was slowly pulling me deeper inside her I could still her her moans and gaps they sounded more intense but were becoming more difficult to hear as I went deeper I closed my eyes out of fear and prepared for the worst when I came into her womb.

Aunt Ariel was laying flat on the bed sweating gasping and her belly was bulging,(Aunt Ariel) Wow! I- I almost fainted from sheer pleasure that was beyond amazing! as she had her right hand on her belly smiling with satisfaction she saw her belly moving a little and giggled inside I was moving around in my small yet soft and warm prison as much as it sickens me it was very comfortable and I actually kind of liked it. already the umbilical cord was attached to me and I didn't have any need to breath My aunt knew she would be in huge trouble with my mom but thought it worth it.

three days later as my aunt carried me around doing shopping all the while clearly enjoying her little prisoner I found myself losing the will to ever come out I wonder what will happen when my mom comes back?


The End?

[Radijs]

Sorry, but I couldn't get through it. Even though it's quite short you nearly lack all punctuation and proper capitalizaton.
My first advice to you would be to fix that. Your story could be really good, but without proper formatting it just becomes an unreadable mess.

[LillyBells]

To me this is readable, but not enjoyable as the many spelling errors make it hard to read it correctly.

[sandyQ]

You got'ta watch out for Aunts, they'll get you every time. Man, you fell for the old shrinking soda trick.

[Elpie]

a good story, but like others said it's being held back by grammatical, punctuation, and formatting errors