-Prelude: A draconic succubus named Lili seduces a middle school teacher named Patrick and lures him and his class to her home in order to devour them all and steal their souls.
This is a small part of a bigger story I am currently working on, I decided to post this part since it contains adult on adult vore and the rest will be adult on underage character vore so I will probably not post that other part, not to the forum at least. This is my first time writing unbirth so any feedback on what works, what doesn't or what could be improved on would be appreciated. Of course do keep in mind that this is a small part of a bigger story which will involve lots of other instances of vore, so I could have made this longer and more descriptive, but I wanted to keep things fairly even and not to focus too much on one instances of vore.
So anyway, I hope some people will enjoy this! Here it goes, my very first unbirth writing:
-Patrick: "I'm telling you kids, you're gonna love Lili! She has magical powers and is immortal and all kinds of other cool stuff!"
He told them, obviously very excited. Lili had instructed him to escort the kids into the living room without waiting for her, which he did. Leaving the kids on their own, Patrick then walked back outside. At this time Lili was standing on the edge of the roof, she had told her lover to wait for her on the front lawn. The succubus smiled wickedly as she observed her prey walk out of the house, moaning in sensual hunger. She couldn't wait to have the man inside her, the mere thought making her wet. Lili wasn't wearing any clothes, as a dragoness she felt more comfortable naked.
-Patrick: "Lili? Are you there?"
The teacher asked, looking around for the dragoness. Lili's carnal desires had waited long enough, aiming for the human, she jumped off the roof, spreading her legs to reveal her plump, moist pussy. Before Patrick could even realize what was happening, the predatory woman landed right on top of him, her momentum forcing the man's head past her vulva and into her vaginal canal. *Shhpplllooorrkks*
-Patrick: "Mmmmfffftttfff!"
Lili's weight quickly drove her down, pushing the man deeper into the warm, musky confines of her sex. Shocked and confused, Patrick struggled, but he was firmly held in place by the woman's powerful thighs. He could do nothing as he was slowly engulfed by this pink, slimy inferno. Lili moaned in pleasure, biting her lip. She loved feeling her prey squirm and stretch her pussy, her sex overflowing with vaginal fluids as it devoured the man alive. The unfortunate teacher could feel this fleshy tunnel pulse and flex around him, sucking him in with a wet squelching noise. *Sshhhkklllooorrpppsss* And with this Patrick completely vanished into the man-eating vagina, leaving only his boots behind. The succubus let out a satisfied sigh, sitting down on the ground, a human sized bulge in her midsection. She smirked, feeling her lover settle down into her unholy womb.
-Patrick: "Li..Lili? Is that you? Wh.. what are you doing?"
He nervously asked, his voice heavily muffled by the layer of flesh surrounding him. The man was afraid, confused and kinda grossed out. Why would Lili do something like this?
-Lili: "Don't worry dear, you'll be digested soon enough~"
She sensually declared, patting over her big tummy.
-Patrick: "Bu... but I thought you loved me!"
-Lili: "Poor fool, I should really thank you for delivering me such a feast! Young souls truly are the most succulent~"
-Patrick: "You... you tricked me! You monster, let me out!"
-Lili: "Awww, what's wrong? Thought you couldn't wait to get inside me~ Now quiet down and let me digest will ya?"
The demoness cruelly teased, kneading her belly. Soon her infernal uterus started working on its content, filling with acidic fluids and contracting harshly around the human, slowly crushing the poor man. Patrick cried out in anguish as his flesh was melted and absorbed, the carnivorous womb groaning as it mercilessly processed his body. *Bbbggrroooww-Gggwwwurrrgggss* Lili moaned in satisfaction, pleasuring herself with one hand while caressing her breasts with the other. After several minutes of lewd fondling, the devious fiend finally climaxed, violently excreting a bunch of bones and half-digested clothes from her vagina. *Shhllurrrpps*
-Lili: "Ahhh~ Hope it was as good for you as it was for me~"
She teasingly commented, the teacher's skull staring blankly at her. The succubus then got back up and stretched herself, a small image of Patrick's face appearing on her voluptuous behind, frozen in abject terror.
-Lili: "Hope you enjoy spending eternity on my ass!"
She then gave her alluring booty a vigorous slap before going back inside, leaving Patrick's remains in a pool of female cum.
((Yeah I know its short but I thought someone might enjoy it none the less. Do tell me if there are any grammar/spelling error, english is not my native language.))
