My Little Pony vore

[Furanz]

I've found possibly the best MLP vore I've ever seen on youtube.

Basically, Twilight gets swallowed up WHOLE by a mysterious horse and she slips right down into his swollen belly half way through. All the noises and the saliva just look so good it's actually hard to believe it's a fanmade animation XD

Best part is, the creator said he's going to make more!! I really can't wait for a Rarity one >:3

Anyways, here's the link! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwgfMfNeR_0&feature=plcp

[Hot_Plate]

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...I WILL find you.

[Delet932b4sk]

Okay, I'll give that to you--trollish yes, but also clever.

And it takes away a bit of the sting that I like that song.

[Humbug]

I've found possibly the best MLP vore I've ever seen on youtube.

Basically, Twilight gets swallowed up WHOLE by a mysterious horse and she slips right down into his swollen belly half way through. All the noises and the saliva just look so good it's actually hard to believe it's a fanmade animation XD

Best part is, the creator said he's going to make more!! I really can't wait for a Rarity one >:3

Anyways, here's the link! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwgfMfNeR_0&feature=plcp

Wow. It even looks real!

[A Nonny Moose]

You... What have you done?

[zarpaulus]

Got another one off the FA trawl:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8908793/

[HughMann]

Hey! Long time no see guys! Love all the work that's been coming to this board!

I thought I would share this, my oc's for tumblr:
http://askpride.tumblr.com/post/3230886 ... ere-ill-be

enjoy!

[RexMundi]

I jsut came to post that o.o

[PonyThroat]

Nice find. I'm lovin it.

[Heartman98]

Got another one off the FA trawl:

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8908793/
[ https://t.facdn.net/[email protected] ]

I see some one has mentioned Pencilman's work, you like it.

[OrcaSnack-Garth]

I've found possibly the best MLP vore I've ever seen on youtube.

Basically, Twilight gets swallowed up WHOLE by a mysterious horse and she slips right down into his swollen belly half way through. All the noises and the saliva just look so good it's actually hard to believe it's a fanmade animation XD

Best part is, the creator said he's going to make more!! I really can't wait for a Rarity one >:3

Anyways, here's the link! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwgfMfNeR_0&feature=plcp

That's the worst animation I've ever seen! It's not even animation, it's just some guy with a camera and a sheet of paper with a poorly drawn Twilight Sparkle on it.

[Hawkster]

I've found possibly the best MLP vore I've ever seen on youtube.

Basically, Twilight gets swallowed up WHOLE by a mysterious horse and she slips right down into his swollen belly half way through. All the noises and the saliva just look so good it's actually hard to believe it's a fanmade animation XD

Best part is, the creator said he's going to make more!! I really can't wait for a Rarity one >:3

Anyways, here's the link! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwgfMfNeR_0&feature=plcp

That's the worst animation I've ever seen! It's not even animation, it's just some guy with a camera and a sheet of paper with a poorly drawn Twilight Sparkle on it.

I dare say sir, you've been trolled.

[OrcaSnack-Garth]

I've found possibly the best MLP vore I've ever seen on youtube.

Basically, Twilight gets swallowed up WHOLE by a mysterious horse and she slips right down into his swollen belly half way through. All the noises and the saliva just look so good it's actually hard to believe it's a fanmade animation XD

Best part is, the creator said he's going to make more!! I really can't wait for a Rarity one >:3

Anyways, here's the link! Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hwgfMfNeR_0&feature=plcp

That's the worst animation I've ever seen! It's not even animation, it's just some guy with a camera and a sheet of paper with a poorly drawn Twilight Sparkle on it.

I dare say sir, you've been trolled.

Thank you, Captain Obvious.

[LugiaMastr]

That's the worst animation I've ever seen! It's not even animation, it's just some guy with a camera and a sheet of paper with a poorly drawn Twilight Sparkle on it.

I dare say sir, you've been trolled.

Thank you, Captain Obvious.

[The_Prof]

Thank you, Captain Obvious.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axtfB7QP ... re=related

[Reaverbot]

I've been meaning to write a pony vore story for a long time. I have other ideas for it, but this was the first one I actually have overcome my struggle to continue to type things up to do. I'm always incredibly unsatisfied with my writing, but I don't really ever see enough pony vore material I'm particularly interested in. Rather than complaining I figured I'd get off my ass and do something for once.

Anyway, here it is. It's short and smutty vore-porn, no title yet but I'll come up with one. Contains plant/f/f and digestion as well, so those who don't like to see ponies die are advised to move along.

Spoiler: show

The outskirts of Ponyville were rarely a dangerous place, but the Everfree Forest was a different story; full of unnatural things not made as nature intended, it was a dangerous place for anyone involved. That was, perhaps, why Fluttershy had fought hoof and nail to prevent herself going into it at night. As she walked aside her friend Twilight out of the dingy hunt near the core of the woods, the pink-maned pegasus gulped nervously., sticking close by her. It had taken the purple unicorn about three hours of constant reminding that Angel would need that medicine for his fever or he'd be sick for the rest of the week unless they visited Zecora in the forest. "Fluttershy...," Twilight muttered, casting her gaze beside her. The pegasus was slumped a little bit, walking as if she was trying to pull Big Macintosh's plow, sighing and exhaling, "Calm down. It's going to be all right. We got there just fine, didn't we? Now we just have to make our way back to everypony waiting for us. We'll use the same route, and-"

"We came during daylight," Fluttershy cut her off, although her voice was low and meek as usual, "not the the night. Who... Who knows what's out here, Twilight?" An involuntary shiver ran through her. The pair turned a corner slowly, passing the shadows of some twisted looking trees. The beaten path that had been cleared by the people of Ponyville to Zecora's hut continued to stretch into the darkness. Twilight had been silenced for the moment. She certainly had a point.. The atmosphere of the forest was all-the-more oppressive at this time. Even the overly-logical unicorn felt a bit of a chill run down her spine...
Twilight Sparkle was not a superstitious pony, but deep in her heart, somehow, she felt that Fluttershy was right. Somehow she felt that something was indeed going to go wrong.
~~~
A few minutes later, a gleaming bit of hope was in sight however; a fork in the road! Set near the entrance of the forest, both ponies recognized it as a sign that they were almost home. A lantern sat in the middle of both pathways, with a split-arrowed sign pointing to Zecora's hut, the way they came, and The Ancient Castle another way. The unmarked road led back to Ponyville. Twilight grinned brightly at this, the fuzzy churning in her stomach banished in favor of a light, floaty feeling of glee and hope, "See, Fluttershy? Told you there was nothing to worry about. Just about five more minutes and we'll be there. She trotted forwards, purple and red tail swaying behind her proudly. She couldn't help but add a little bit of bounce to her haunches! However, when she noted that she only heard one set of hooves, she stopped, casting a questioning glance back. Fluttershy has frozen, staring ahead, looking terribly nervous! Twilight turned her head once again, trying to scan for what was had the pegasus so perturbed. That was when she finally noticed the vines.

Along the path, swamped in random directions, were long green vines, visible in the lamplight. Leafy and thick, they seemed to be cast out leading into the darkness.. Probably attached to one of the many big trees that waited just beyond the glow of the lamplight, they crisscrossed along the soil. Twilight momentarily was confused, noting that those things certainly weren't there when they passed through before.. But at the same time, they were vines. There was no need to be alarmed, "Fluttershy, calm down. They're just vines. They probably got blown down by the wind or something." And just to prove a point, the purple unicorn trotted forward, turning to face her friend once she was standing by the lantern. Those vines were on all sides of her hooves now.. Limp and yeilding, as vines should be. Harmless.
Fluttershy stared for a moment, and then sighed, moving forward slowly to join Twilight. Inwardly, she felt silly that something like plants had frightened her. She was good with plants and animals, and yet the sight of some being in a spot she didn't remember rendered her unable to move. "Oh.. Twilight, I'm so sorry," she muttered to her friend, "I wish I wasn't such a coward sometimes." Twilight smiled and moved to her friend, giving her a soft hug around the neck. She wasn't mad at Fluttershy at all.. She accepted the pegasus' flaws fully. Perhaps too fully, as when she gave that hug, she stopped paying attention entirely to the vines beneath her.. Which had now begun to move.

Stirring along the ground, the thick leafy tendrils moved unnaturally, more like snakes or tentacles than like any sort of plant in the world.. At least, any sort of plant that existed outside the Everfree Forest. The ponies were together and off guard.. And that was all the cue that the things needed before they struck. Raising up off of the ground into the air, all at once the tangled mess of vines rose like cobras standing defensively. Both ponies gasped and let go of each other, but at that point there was no time to do anything except make that slack-jawed expression before, methodically, vines wrapped around each leg between then, flipping them over onto their backs with a thud! Two ponies, easily caught. Two ponies, ripe for the picking...

Twilight growled as she was held down like a turtle on it's shell all of a sudden, her horn glowing brightly as she tried to cast a spell at the vines.. But it rebounded uselessly off the tendrils, and she began to be tugged away from the lantern, along with Fluttershy who was helplessly squirming, trying to flutter her rather weak wings. Was this creature magic-resistant somehow? Nevertheless, there was nothing to do but continue to try! As the pair were dragged through the dirt and leaves roughly, Twilight cast bolt after bolt on the vines, each ricocheting harmlessly as the first one did. As she continued to cast, what free part of her brain not focused on the spellcasting idly contemplated where these things could be taking them... And to what. Fluttershy, meanwhile, could only whimper and remind herself why she never should have gone into the forest at night. The dragging seemed to last an eternity, but it did come to a stop eventually... The pair squealing as they were tugged off the ground and held dangling in the air!

The quick motion of being pulled through the woods had made Twilight's eyes a messy blur of darkness, and casting all those spells hadn't helped either; she was effectively out of energy. She couldn't see what was holding her, lightheaded and dizzy.. Only managing to moan a quiet, "What?" Fluttershy, though.. Fluttershy could see what had kidnapped them in full. Once again, she was slack-jawed with horror. Nestled in a small clearing was an enormous plant, with what appeared to be dozens of vines branching out from it. It was around the size of some of the trees in the forest, towering far larger than even the biggest flower ever should; that was what it was after all, judging by the large red bug that somewhat resembled a rose set on a stem as broad around as two ponies standing side by side. A sticky sweet scent eminated all around the clearing, likely coming from the plant, but Fluttershy was too terrified to contemplate it.

Twilight could suddenly feel herself moving again, the vines making an ominous creaking sound with the motion. Her eyes widened and came into focus, at last.. Finding herself suddenly dangling by her hind legs above the bud of the massive flower.. That sweet scent overpowering. She let out a cry of fear, and shut her eyes tight, attempting to use her teleport spell.. Cursing her own panic that caused her to not do that in the first place! Her horn glowed.. But the only thing that came out of the effort was a few useless sparks, lighting up the dark clearing like a failing zippo. This was it, wasn't it? No energy, no friends free and knowing that she was here able to help her escape.. The vines around her legs loosening, and then letting go completely.
"No, no, no, I-," the unicorn exclaimed, but the last part of her declaration was muffled as she plopped headfirst into the bud. Immediately, she was covered in some sort of sticky sap-like substance. Her lower half, haunches and hind legs, were still outside of the flower bud, kicking helplessly at the air, trying to buck an opponent that was on the opposite side of her.. But the enormous flower moved it's bud, originally facing a slanted up, to a full-tilt stare up at the moon through the treetops of the everfree forest. Twilight lost her tenuous hold on the spot she was in, and promptly slipped deeper into the wet, sticky depths of the massive flower.. Suddenly finding herself at what must have been the core of the bud. It was a slightly more open area, but the sap had clung far too tightly to her fur by now. She was stuck on her back as she had been with the vines.. But now, it was the sap that held her. And more was seeping all over her body. She felt terribly numb.

Meanwhile, Fluttershy was being tilted just above the flower.. stammering and stuttering squeak after squeak after squeak! Unlike Twilight, the plant was lowering its vine-tendril down further, further towards the opening of the plant. She wouldn't be able to fly if she was let go! Just as she was about to touch down on the entrance as her friend had, she managed to work up some courage: "P-Please d-d-don't e-e-eat me.. U..Um.. I-If that's.. Okay," the pegasus gasped over the noise of the creaking vines that echoed in her ears.

The plant hesitated, almost as if considering this.. But only a moment. Even the affect of Fluttershy wasn't quite enough to stop the massive thing from claiming the second pony. Unlike Twilight, who was allowed to slip down, Fluttershy was much more unceremoniously dumped into the maw of the plant, the sticky, tingly sap coating her long pink main, covering it in yellow gunk along with the rest of her fur, sticking it down across half of her face. She squealed in protest, but the plant would have none of it; she slid down to the core of the bud alongside Twilight, landing on her stomach in contrast.

"..T..Twilight, what do we do now..?" Fluttershy finally managed to ask. The sap on her felt incredibly uncomfortable. It didn't hurt... But it just felt.. Wrong. Twilight opened her mouth to answer, but was cut off as she watched the few traces of light inside of the flower but vanish as it closed itself. She didn't understand what was going on.. And had little time to figure it out as an enormous amount of the sticky sap-stuff that already covered them began to pour into the core of the bud. Both ponies shrieked in unison. Outside, the pair's squirms were hardly noticeable.. Not that they could move much, regardless. Their screams audible at first, it was quickly replaced with gurgling as the sticky sap filled their mouths, encasing them. The plant shifted, a churning noise now loudly filling the clearing. No birds scattered, no squirrels fled at this booming noise; they had long abandoned the area in fear of the massive, carnivorous plant that had taken up residence here. Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy unfortunately couldn't learn this lesson, as they were churned in the massive pool of sticky sap, their bodies dissolving, becoming nutrients for the massive hungry plant to survive in the darkness of the forest.

After only a few minutes, the flower tilted itself forward, it's petals opening broadly and brilliantly once more... Perhaps it could have been beautiful if it wasn't so deadly. Out of the bud spilled a mass of sticky bones of various types, clattering on the ground, a total mess. Two skulls, sockets filled thick with sap, clattered last.. One of them with a horn. They smelled sickeningly sweet, just as the interior of the flower had.. Flies already being pulled over to buzz around the remains of Twilight and Fluttershy, any that touched them sharing a sticky fate of their own as they dissolved upon contact.

Content and settled once more, the flower set itself in it's original position.. The vines that had taken the two ponies slithering back to the road to lie in wait. It had found a perfect position from which to snatch up anyone foolish enough to visit the forest at night when it bloomed... It could only hope that maybe the others that lived nearby could possibly be as foolish as the doomed mares that lie in a sticky, bleached heap on the grass below it.

[frozenfire]

I've been meaning to write a pony vore story for a long time. I have other ideas for it, but this was the first one I actually have overcome my struggle to continue to type things up to do. I'm always incredibly unsatisfied with my writing, but I don't really ever see enough pony vore material I'm particularly interested in. Rather than complaining I figured I'd get off my ass and do something for once.

Anyway, here it is. It's short and smutty vore-porn, no title yet but I'll come up with one. Contains plant/f/f and digestion as well, so those who don't like to see ponies die are advised to move along.

Spoiler: show

The outskirts of Ponyville were rarely a dangerous place, but the Everfree Forest was a different story; full of unnatural things not made as nature intended, it was a dangerous place for anyone involved. That was, perhaps, why Fluttershy had fought hoof and nail to prevent herself going into it at night. As she walked aside her friend Twilight out of the dingy hunt near the core of the woods, the pink-maned pegasus gulped nervously., sticking close by her. It had taken the purple unicorn about three hours of constant reminding that Angel would need that medicine for his fever or he'd be sick for the rest of the week unless they visited Zecora in the forest. "Fluttershy...," Twilight muttered, casting her gaze beside her. The pegasus was slumped a little bit, walking as if she was trying to pull Big Macintosh's plow, sighing and exhaling, "Calm down. It's going to be all right. We got there just fine, didn't we? Now we just have to make our way back to everypony waiting for us. We'll use the same route, and-"

"We came during daylight," Fluttershy cut her off, although her voice was low and meek as usual, "not the the night. Who... Who knows what's out here, Twilight?" An involuntary shiver ran through her. The pair turned a corner slowly, passing the shadows of some twisted looking trees. The beaten path that had been cleared by the people of Ponyville to Zecora's hut continued to stretch into the darkness. Twilight had been silenced for the moment. She certainly had a point.. The atmosphere of the forest was all-the-more oppressive at this time. Even the overly-logical unicorn felt a bit of a chill run down her spine...
Twilight Sparkle was not a superstitious pony, but deep in her heart, somehow, she felt that Fluttershy was right. Somehow she felt that something was indeed going to go wrong.
~~~
A few minutes later, a gleaming bit of hope was in sight however; a fork in the road! Set near the entrance of the forest, both ponies recognized it as a sign that they were almost home. A lantern sat in the middle of both pathways, with a split-arrowed sign pointing to Zecora's hut, the way they came, and The Ancient Castle another way. The unmarked road led back to Ponyville. Twilight grinned brightly at this, the fuzzy churning in her stomach banished in favor of a light, floaty feeling of glee and hope, "See, Fluttershy? Told you there was nothing to worry about. Just about five more minutes and we'll be there. She trotted forwards, purple and red tail swaying behind her proudly. She couldn't help but add a little bit of bounce to her haunches! However, when she noted that she only heard one set of hooves, she stopped, casting a questioning glance back. Fluttershy has frozen, staring ahead, looking terribly nervous! Twilight turned her head once again, trying to scan for what was had the pegasus so perturbed. That was when she finally noticed the vines.

Along the path, swamped in random directions, were long green vines, visible in the lamplight. Leafy and thick, they seemed to be cast out leading into the darkness.. Probably attached to one of the many big trees that waited just beyond the glow of the lamplight, they crisscrossed along the soil. Twilight momentarily was confused, noting that those things certainly weren't there when they passed through before.. But at the same time, they were vines. There was no need to be alarmed, "Fluttershy, calm down. They're just vines. They probably got blown down by the wind or something." And just to prove a point, the purple unicorn trotted forward, turning to face her friend once she was standing by the lantern. Those vines were on all sides of her hooves now.. Limp and yeilding, as vines should be. Harmless.
Fluttershy stared for a moment, and then sighed, moving forward slowly to join Twilight. Inwardly, she felt silly that something like plants had frightened her. She was good with plants and animals, and yet the sight of some being in a spot she didn't remember rendered her unable to move. "Oh.. Twilight, I'm so sorry," she muttered to her friend, "I wish I wasn't such a coward sometimes." Twilight smiled and moved to her friend, giving her a soft hug around the neck. She wasn't mad at Fluttershy at all.. She accepted the pegasus' flaws fully. Perhaps too fully, as when she gave that hug, she stopped paying attention entirely to the vines beneath her.. Which had now begun to move.

Stirring along the ground, the thick leafy tendrils moved unnaturally, more like snakes or tentacles than like any sort of plant in the world.. At least, any sort of plant that existed outside the Everfree Forest. The ponies were together and off guard.. And that was all the cue that the things needed before they struck. Raising up off of the ground into the air, all at once the tangled mess of vines rose like cobras standing defensively. Both ponies gasped and let go of each other, but at that point there was no time to do anything except make that slack-jawed expression before, methodically, vines wrapped around each leg between then, flipping them over onto their backs with a thud! Two ponies, easily caught. Two ponies, ripe for the picking...

Twilight growled as she was held down like a turtle on it's shell all of a sudden, her horn glowing brightly as she tried to cast a spell at the vines.. But it rebounded uselessly off the tendrils, and she began to be tugged away from the lantern, along with Fluttershy who was helplessly squirming, trying to flutter her rather weak wings. Was this creature magic-resistant somehow? Nevertheless, there was nothing to do but continue to try! As the pair were dragged through the dirt and leaves roughly, Twilight cast bolt after bolt on the vines, each ricocheting harmlessly as the first one did. As she continued to cast, what free part of her brain not focused on the spellcasting idly contemplated where these things could be taking them... And to what. Fluttershy, meanwhile, could only whimper and remind herself why she never should have gone into the forest at night. The dragging seemed to last an eternity, but it did come to a stop eventually... The pair squealing as they were tugged off the ground and held dangling in the air!

The quick motion of being pulled through the woods had made Twilight's eyes a messy blur of darkness, and casting all those spells hadn't helped either; she was effectively out of energy. She couldn't see what was holding her, lightheaded and dizzy.. Only managing to moan a quiet, "What?" Fluttershy, though.. Fluttershy could see what had kidnapped them in full. Once again, she was slack-jawed with horror. Nestled in a small clearing was an enormous plant, with what appeared to be dozens of vines branching out from it. It was around the size of some of the trees in the forest, towering far larger than even the biggest flower ever should; that was what it was after all, judging by the large red bug that somewhat resembled a rose set on a stem as broad around as two ponies standing side by side. A sticky sweet scent eminated all around the clearing, likely coming from the plant, but Fluttershy was too terrified to contemplate it.

Twilight could suddenly feel herself moving again, the vines making an ominous creaking sound with the motion. Her eyes widened and came into focus, at last.. Finding herself suddenly dangling by her hind legs above the bud of the massive flower.. That sweet scent overpowering. She let out a cry of fear, and shut her eyes tight, attempting to use her teleport spell.. Cursing her own panic that caused her to not do that in the first place! Her horn glowed.. But the only thing that came out of the effort was a few useless sparks, lighting up the dark clearing like a failing zippo. This was it, wasn't it? No energy, no friends free and knowing that she was here able to help her escape.. The vines around her legs loosening, and then letting go completely.
"No, no, no, I-," the unicorn exclaimed, but the last part of her declaration was muffled as she plopped headfirst into the bud. Immediately, she was covered in some sort of sticky sap-like substance. Her lower half, haunches and hind legs, were still outside of the flower bud, kicking helplessly at the air, trying to buck an opponent that was on the opposite side of her.. But the enormous flower moved it's bud, originally facing a slanted up, to a full-tilt stare up at the moon through the treetops of the everfree forest. Twilight lost her tenuous hold on the spot she was in, and promptly slipped deeper into the wet, sticky depths of the massive flower.. Suddenly finding herself at what must have been the core of the bud. It was a slightly more open area, but the sap had clung far too tightly to her fur by now. She was stuck on her back as she had been with the vines.. But now, it was the sap that held her. And more was seeping all over her body. She felt terribly numb.

Meanwhile, Fluttershy was being tilted just above the flower.. stammering and stuttering squeak after squeak after squeak! Unlike Twilight, the plant was lowering its vine-tendril down further, further towards the opening of the plant. She wouldn't be able to fly if she was let go! Just as she was about to touch down on the entrance as her friend had, she managed to work up some courage: "P-Please d-d-don't e-e-eat me.. U..Um.. I-If that's.. Okay," the pegasus gasped over the noise of the creaking vines that echoed in her ears.

The plant hesitated, almost as if considering this.. But only a moment. Even the affect of Fluttershy wasn't quite enough to stop the massive thing from claiming the second pony. Unlike Twilight, who was allowed to slip down, Fluttershy was much more unceremoniously dumped into the maw of the plant, the sticky, tingly sap coating her long pink main, covering it in yellow gunk along with the rest of her fur, sticking it down across half of her face. She squealed in protest, but the plant would have none of it; she slid down to the core of the bud alongside Twilight, landing on her stomach in contrast.

"..T..Twilight, what do we do now..?" Fluttershy finally managed to ask. The sap on her felt incredibly uncomfortable. It didn't hurt... But it just felt.. Wrong. Twilight opened her mouth to answer, but was cut off as she watched the few traces of light inside of the flower but vanish as it closed itself. She didn't understand what was going on.. And had little time to figure it out as an enormous amount of the sticky sap-stuff that already covered them began to pour into the core of the bud. Both ponies shrieked in unison. Outside, the pair's squirms were hardly noticeable.. Not that they could move much, regardless. Their screams audible at first, it was quickly replaced with gurgling as the sticky sap filled their mouths, encasing them. The plant shifted, a churning noise now loudly filling the clearing. No birds scattered, no squirrels fled at this booming noise; they had long abandoned the area in fear of the massive, carnivorous plant that had taken up residence here. Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy unfortunately couldn't learn this lesson, as they were churned in the massive pool of sticky sap, their bodies dissolving, becoming nutrients for the massive hungry plant to survive in the darkness of the forest.

After only a few minutes, the flower tilted itself forward, it's petals opening broadly and brilliantly once more... Perhaps it could have been beautiful if it wasn't so deadly. Out of the bud spilled a mass of sticky bones of various types, clattering on the ground, a total mess. Two skulls, sockets filled thick with sap, clattered last.. One of them with a horn. They smelled sickeningly sweet, just as the interior of the flower had.. Flies already being pulled over to buzz around the remains of Twilight and Fluttershy, any that touched them sharing a sticky fate of their own as they dissolved upon contact.

Content and settled once more, the flower set itself in it's original position.. The vines that had taken the two ponies slithering back to the road to lie in wait. It had found a perfect position from which to snatch up anyone foolish enough to visit the forest at night when it bloomed... It could only hope that maybe the others that lived nearby could possibly be as foolish as the doomed mares that lie in a sticky, bleached heap on the grass below it.

Being unsatisfied with your work is completely normal, It's just because you were the one who wrote it. Personally I thought it was very good.

[andrea]

Finally got a gallery. Story is up, as the first part of a long, long series.

http://aryion.com/g4/view/225983

[Kitti]

This is a massive thread.

I've seen some nice contributions, guys.

[Nibor]

You think this is bad? check out the random thread!
Truly, there are many threads that are bigger than this one, and that's saying something!