Deathworks wrote:Hi!
First of all, "HOORAY!! F/f shrinker RPG!".
Now, that that is settled, we can return to our regular programme (you can't imagine how enthusiastic I got when I read something about catgirl and intestines.
But before I can delve further into my thoughts on your game, there is something I need to bring up. The eating image you use when swallowed by Estelle et al.; if I am not mistaken, that is taken from a doujinshi game by MTS: Memories of the Fairy. If I am correct, I wanted to ask whether you have asked for permission to use that image in your game.
Leaving behind these details, I want to stress that I not only like the basic idea of such a game, but I also enjoyed the way you went about things in your game thus far:
First of all, female on female scores very high with me, and the female characters you have are quite good. I especially like the fact that you do not focus on evil/nasty characters, but rather have more pleasant and reasonable characters like Manami and that magician. Having tiny people and large people basically cooperate offers a lot more of interesting interaction in my opinion, so I sincerely hope that you will stick to this positive attitude (of course, having opponents swallow the character is also an option ).
Secondly, I have to agree that the spelling is at some times rather distracting. I suggest switching to more standard English instead of using heavy slang at times as players may get confused by some formulations and thus get hindered in enjoying the game.
I also agree that having the character survive traversing the digestive tract would offer a lot of enjoyment for the players and some potential for some nice scenes. In addition to such scenes and also encouraging vore ( ), this possibility could also allow you to have hidden dungeons (sewers, etc.) which can only be entered by getting eaten by a specific person.
I do not know whether you had a chance to see the modified version KronikVore23 did (he removed the link to his upload, but the remains of his thread are here.). I think that adding UB as another aspect to the game could also be interesting. In addition, he also modified your game to have you get swallowed after getting defeated by monsters. I don't know, but you might wish to get in touch with him.
As for the storyline, I am curious about what take you will have on things. Like most games created here (DGVRPG, Krishna3ca's game, Vore Night), you seem to have opted for the world-saving/changing hero(ine) with an attitude, so it will be interesting to see how your tale differs and where things are similar.
If you need any help, I am ready to help you, both via this thread or via PM. At times (like around this last weekend), I may be absent, resulting in delays. I can help with character concepts, story/quest concepts/ideas and other such general aspects of the design. I can also write up some dialogue/situations for you if you are interested. I do not have that engine, though, so I can't help you with the actual programming.
Anyhow, I really like the demo and want to help you and your game.
Deathworks
First off Thanks for the review
I'm glad that people seem to like it so far. [Well i haven't had any nasty Pm's yet at least]
characters: my focus is on not having to many truly evil characters if you play the my next release. [Which will be soon] You will see what i mean when you encounter the first bad guy.
Full tour: At first i wasn't really going to bother with it because it would require more work And Also because some people wouldnt like it but since its in demand it seems i might add it in at some points
Unbirthing: Well i was already going planing to add some in before it was mentioned
KronikVore23: I'm confused about ''modified version'' ? I went to the thread that you linked. I looked it over but i still didn't really get what you were talking about. Or what the thread was even for.
And about your offer of help. If your not busy/really want to help send me a pm and we can discuss it further.
Thanks again for the reviews