On The Menu: Rise of Zee "Im Back Baby!"

[beagirl]

The only thing I'm really concerned about is grammar and punctuation. Those are big ones for me because the immersion goes away if you can't really read what is being said.

Don't worry I'm going to run through the grammar next, hopefully I'll be able to find all the major mistakes.

[soniti54]

The promise is strong with this one.

Really though, it doesn't even look like what I'd expect from a first attempt. Just don't get discouraged if there's any relentlessly persistent bugs, since I suspect this may be a little ambitious for starters. Hopefully development goes smoothly though, good luck!

[boyot]

can any one post a link to download this game?

[kenny316]

can any one post a link to download this game?

The OP will when they are done...lol

[Dark_phoenix]

Familiar faces...not that I mind.

[TheAllSeeingEye]

THis looks good... o_o
I NEEDZ DEMO!!! >w< lol

[Redpod]

inthe game,you arepred,preyor both'

[beagirl]

inthe game,you arepred,preyor both'

Both

[dagar]

Okees, mayor bug I found XD If you get eaten, and "accept" your fate on the first fight, then.... when you get control of the blond girl.... go back to the classroom, you can continue the game as a blond XD

Also a wall in the upstairs room isn't solid.... Seduce is spelled wrong for a skill, I think.... And lastly, yes! You can fix the blond girl thing by changing clothes, but interacting with the toilet is death for you!

[beagirl]

Okees, mayor bug I found XD If you get eaten, and "accept" your fate on the first fight, then.... when you get control of the blond girl.... go back to the classroom, you can continue the game as a blond XD

Also a wall in the upstairs room isn't solid.... Seduce is spelled wrong for a skill, I think.... And lastly, yes! You can fix the blond girl thing by changing clothes, but interacting with the toilet is death for you!

right, like I said this isn't the current one I'm working on so I don't want to spend to much time on it, but I will solve major bugs when I can, so I'll take a look...
thanks for the feed back though it is appreciated if you find any more bugs let me know, especially so I can make sure they are not there in the version I'm working on.

[Schpadoinkle]

The only thing I'm really concerned about is grammar and punctuation. Those are big ones for me because the immersion goes away if you can't really read what is being said.

Don't worry I'm going to run through the grammar next, hopefully I'll be able to find all the major mistakes.

I don't want to be rude, but I hope so.

The spelling and grammar so far has just been atrocious.

[Koseki]

well, i must say i really liked the game! the scenes that were finished were amazing, i loved the dialogue and the idea of the game.

i look forward to updates or the other version you are working....GREAT JOB!

[Big_D]

dropbox is being evil and wont let me have the game, I'm both proud and sadden at the same time

[kenny316]

To much traffic at dropbox link ATM.

[dagar]

Okay, one more thing. It doesn't matter if you let yourself be digested, and then changed back. IF YOU AT ANY POINT USE THE BATHROOM WITHOUT PREY, YOU WILL GAME OVER! This is your warning. It will always play the blond girl's good bye if I don't have prey and walk over the toilet.

[sommion]

Somebody can pass a Alternative link? i want to try this game, even unfinished ^^

[Dark_phoenix]

The download link has too much traffic...

[TheAllSeeingEye]

This is why I hate dropbox
I NEED LINK PLZ!!!! >.<

[Themastermushroom]

i try do download, but after i finish to download say the file is corrupted and remove, is normal?

[TheAllSeeingEye]

i try do download, but after i finish to download say the file is corrupted and remove, is normal?

Its due to the file being taken down by Dropbox due to high traffic