Seproth wrote:City of Lukington wrote:http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1881342-The-EMOtional-Voyage-Part-3
Just referencing this again cos nobody has given feedback yet...maybe it's crap
I was going to comment but opted not to on account of being really REALLY lazy
So I will say something here
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What's your obsession with people eating worms?
Still
I did enjoy the story. If not for the fact that it just sorta... stopped. Like not ended just kinda was like peace bitches I'm out
Hey I don't have an obsession with worm vore, it's just when I was writing it I was trying to think of something gross for her to eat and I remembered I'd done that in a previous story so I was like fuck it really.
And yeah I did sorta rush the end. Sorry you didn't like it then Seproth, but cheers ROxOr