observer wrote:These are my favorite kinds of stories from you. Good ol' college or high school girls with a secret desire to devour other girls... I've literally never found anyone even half as talented as you are at writing these.
You write amazing sadistic preds, I love the way they taunt their meals before swallowing them down. If I had to complain about one thing is that I wish the preds would tease about the aftermath of the vore more often (like bit about finding bones in the toilet the next day in 'Laura's Secret') because for me that's the most humiliating aspect of being vored, and what I like about vore is the complete domination of pred over prey.
But that's really just a personal thing, I can't expect to find stories catered completely to my tastes.
Anyway, amazing work as always, hope to see more stories like this from you.
Yeah I tend to stick to the college age girls since that was the period of time in my life when I discovered other people had the vore fetish like I do. Plus it's super easy to write younger people because they aren't quite mature enough to realize what they're doing, at least in a fantasy setting.
You know I don't really set out to write sadistic pred. I just start typing and whatever happens...well, happens. Does that make sense? It seems like anyone who would treat tiny people the way my preds do would have to be sadistic on some level, that's why they never let the victims back out again once swallowed.In this particular story I fully intended Alison to make it through the ordeal alive, to be left in the box as a shrunken pet. Well, as I was typing Sarah decided to do something different. It seems she was still hungry and, well, you read what happened. That's part of the fun in writing. Sometimes the story just goes in a different direction than you envisioned.
Thanks for the comments!