My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

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My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Komsomol » Sat Oct 20, 2007 2:44 pm

After finishing my first vore comic ( http://aryion.com/modules.php?name=Foru ... pic&t=9163 ) I decided to make a video based on it.
The quality is a crap, but if you liked the comic I think you'll enjoy the movie. :D
http://www.mediafire.com/?7gjtblxd5lm
An exciting trip inside the dragon's body including esophagus, stomach and intestines. 8)
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Deadzombie666 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 2:49 pm

I'm downloading .. looking forward to this!!!

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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Deadzombie666 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 2:57 pm

Well Im ganna do a short review.

Pro's
1. Awesome video, i dont know what's it like to do animation, but i recon it would have taken a while to do all that.
2. I like the whole first person and 3rd person thing going there.
3. Great detail into the stomach etc and the dragon nicely done.

Now the Con's.
1. You might of needed some sound. Try making a topic asking for them.
2. You needed a better recording devise, I advise fraps. Try serching fraps in google.
3. It would be better to see the person getting vored. That would have been really cool.

All in all i really liked it dude. Thank you very much for the upload / Download.

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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Dracotaur » Sat Oct 20, 2007 3:05 pm

Nice work. While I'm far from being anywhere close to picture quality, I'm working on some 3D stuff as well.

Keep up the great work ^_^
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Deadzombie666 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 3:10 pm

Great ' Dracotaur ' Keep me imformed with that, and i sure will watch it :D! Looking forward to it already.

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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Komsomol » Sat Oct 20, 2007 3:19 pm

Deadzombie666 wrote:2. You needed a better recording devise, I advise fraps. Try serching fraps in google.

I have fraps, but the damn thing doesn't compress videos while recording, so I simply run out of disk space in 10 seconds.

The video is made through Serious Sam game engine, so if anyone has that game and wants to record a better video I could just give him a level. 8)
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Deadzombie666 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 3:22 pm

Hmm Yes fraps does make the file really big ..Hmm ... I'm stummped then dude. Well at least the video was really good.

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P.S Those ' Cons ' wernt ment to sound / be a bad thing. I thought i was trying to help lol. I'm kinda new to the whole reply thing.
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Xintar » Sat Oct 20, 2007 6:43 pm

Well you know the 'what you could do better' bits but honestly, that's amazing dude, I love full digestion and I most animations I've seen that even come near it just seem to rush the whole thing and ruin it, yours despite what other's have mentioned is just great because it doesn't, hope you do more and carry on improving your work. :D
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby nanakra » Sat Oct 20, 2007 8:24 pm

(_( (looks left)
)_) (looks right)

....WOOT!!!!....


(runs away)
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby komaru » Sat Oct 20, 2007 9:36 pm

I can only sum it up in one word: Awesome!, I hope to see more like this in the future^_^
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby AiraFox » Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:50 am

I enjoyed that as much as the comic. While the quality isn't the best, it's definitely very good for your first video!
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby hm10101 » Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:54 am

(_( (looks left)
)_) (looks right)

....WOOT!!!!....


(runs away)


I LOLed at that!!
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby nanakra » Mon Oct 22, 2007 12:28 am

hm10101 wrote:
(_( (looks left)
)_) (looks right)

....WOOT!!!!....


(runs away)


I LOLed at that!!


:D

My day is now made!
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Re: My first vore video [POV, digestion, scat]

Postby Delphinus » Mon Oct 22, 2007 3:25 am

That was actually pretty danged sweet. Thanks for sharing your work! Though I'd suggest uploading to youtube or something, cause a lot of people around here dislike downloading.

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Nice!

Postby ElPortero » Tue Oct 23, 2007 12:18 am

Hey, everyone has to start somewhere! I'm really glad you posted this! :)
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Re: Nice!

Postby Iyeru » Fri Jul 11, 2008 5:48 pm

Not bad, a proper coming out as poop could be done, sound would be nice... and let's see... all pov shots rather than going back outside would be good too.
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Postby Iyeru » Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:05 pm

As much as I'd love to edit it with windows movie maker. WMM complains all the time that the source is not found. I can't edit it myself to have all pov shots *sighs*
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Re:

Postby AwillingMouse » Fri Aug 08, 2008 1:17 am

Awesome animation!

You might be able to find a better movie recording program at download.com. That would be great if you had the movie in better quality. Even if you can't, the movie is still awesome!
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Re: Nice!

Postby Zera_Kori » Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:28 am

Hah, I like the idea. Is it Red Rotami from your story? The esophagus and the stomach with lumps of food inside are made great, nothing to say. But I didn't like the mouth... with that horizontal red "roof", or how to call it... it looks unrealistic((
I also was glad to see scat! Few of vore video-makers dare to show scat)) respect! Make more! :gulp:
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Re: Nice!

Postby Zeara » Fri Aug 22, 2008 4:56 pm

verrrrry nice
All Arise...
Now be seated...
Now Arise again...
Now get down with yo self!!
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