Subway Station (F/F) Soft/Hard
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7 months ago
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7 months ago
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Gentle_Grounds
“Subway Station”, a short story with a dark ending that concludes what happens when one acts like something they are not. I decided to be blunt with this story. I noticed that my longer and more detailed stories tend to intimidate many viewers. Why? I have the slightest clue. Hopefully this story attracts a number of creative and constructive comments. If not, I guess it’s back to the drawing board – so many people do not understand that writing a piece of work is not easy, it’s like drawing or painting, it takes time and dedication.
The idea of the story came to mind when I watched the MARTA incident that occurred in which a young woman (she was twenty five years of age) intimidated an elderly woman and no came to help. It angered me, but it gave me a story idea and here it is. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. More short stories on the way. If there are any errors, please email them to me. I will be happy to check them out and make corrections if possible.
Here’s the video url of what I’m talking about. This is a public transportation I normally take to commute to work, college, and home…so this wasn’t anything out of the usual.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NZtGz_7WI0
You're pretty good with facial expressions (that "oh cra...!"-face. PRICELESS). 8DDD
I like how she throws him into her mouth like a candy hahaha.
The internal bits have nice colours, too. 83