Thank you! I had fun imagining Annikki and thinking the story up.
Of course, expanding the "IVC universe" beyond the IVC itself was originally your idea, and I'm sure your vore restaurant must have inspired me to a significant extent for this. So thanks for that. :)
I'll look forward to it! :) I won't be joining the club for now, though. I really don't want deadlines right now; I need to work at my own messy, stop-start pace.
Bran is SUCH a lucky lucky guy to be her snack... I love how truly relaxed, casual, and uncaring she was about eating him; about him being a simple, and pure morsel of food for her to eat, digest, use up, and utterly forget about!
Murr, I wonder how quickly she forgets her willing little snacks?
If she really cares what her food experiences inside of her as she starts to digest it and use it all up; if it feels pain when she digests it?
I am also very curious how she treated those lucky two volunteers, if they got any more of a special time with her than the quiz show 'winners'? Murrr... She's a wonderful predatoress, and I am hoping to see more of her, and her sending people to their deaths as her simple mere food! ^^ Murr... Very exciting, VERY fun story!
I would assume the first two were eaten in the TV channel's building, where doctors were at hand to make sure there was no adverse reaction (that she didn't choke, or get immediate indigestion, or whatever). They were there for a supervised "test run", after all. I suppose Anni may have chatted with them a bit before eating, though.
To answer your other question, she doesn't think all that much about what happens to them after she's swallowed. She just enjoys the feel of them moving inside, and, later, the feeling she gets from knowing that they're still inside her. They were willing to be eaten, which enables her to focus on her own enjoyment without feeling guilty. ;)
Hmm, I kinda suspected as much. Kind of a shame they didn't get to have even a slightly bit more of a special treatment from her before being eaten. Just there as a simple test, perhaps only getting to chat with her for a very short few minutes, before she ate them up... I am sure they were still happy to be her food though, and I am sure she was very happy to eat them up. That they were, in a way, perhaps even more food-like then the regular show contestants, since she spent so little time with them ^^.
Wonder if she ate them together?
Hee, that is always very wonderful to get to hear, even if it was what I thought! Murr, I wonder if that means she'd still eat people, if she suspected that it was painful to digest inside of her?
Murr, but I do love how, if they are willing, she sees them as simply food; items for her enjoyment. I particularly loved how she ate that one guy on a partially filled stomach. She didn't even mention it to him, much less care how he might feel about sharing her stomach with a bit of other food. She just ate him, and left him to his own devices while she digested him like the food he was to a girl like her ^^.
I bet she's quite a fun girl to get to be shrunk around in a much more intimate setting... I bet it'd be a very wonderful, if probably very short lived, experience to get to enjoy ^^.
I don't think she swallowed them together, since she only needed to make sure she could swallow one person at a time. But she may have eaten them one just after the other, yes, and digested them together.
If someone confronted her with a graphic description of what digestion is like for a prey, she would probably stop eating people. She doesn't want to know. To her, it's supposed to just be fun, and enjoyable for everyone involved.
And you're right, she didn't give much thought to whether or not her prey would be bothered by landing in half-digested food in her stomach. It probably didn't even occur to her.
She's only just starting her "vore career", really. She's "only" eaten five people so far. As mentioned, she's not interested in doing private vores, for now. She turns down the people who volunteer to be her food. Maybe that'll change one day... or not; it'll depend how she feels. :)
Hee, I am sure she did digest them together, for a matter of simple convenience for her and for the studio... They were merely her food. ^^ Hopefully it was still wonderful for them!
Mmm, I wonder if she'd ever care about her prey's desires with regard to landing in digesting food? If she'd even listen if someone didn't want to be eaten and made to digest along with other food?
And so, anything short of a graphic description of what happens to her prey, and she doesn't really know or care?
Hee, we can only hope she'll accept volunteers to be her food someday. I'm curious why she doesn't want them?
XD And I am very curious... How she'd react if she were relaxing, and some already shrunken person showed himself around her. Or perhaps, even tried to sneak into her food (and perhaps did a bad job of it)? Murr, is a fun thought I think!
Thank you very much. I sometimes wonder whether the adjectives make it sound heavy or clumsy, so it's useful to get feedback. Thanks! I'm working on other stories now, but not set in the IVC context.
What a very well written and nice story! I find very amazing how you write. You write like no other, your writing even sometimes inspires me! It's amazing, i've never been inspired from reading before. *sigh* I sure wish I could be on the Vore Quiz. Or at least chat with Annikki. Do you think you could maybe arrange something...?
Unfortunately, I have no plans to write about Annikki again, for now. I have no ideas for her right now, and too many ideas for other things. But maybe one day.
Having said that, if you'd like to write about her yourself... well, just let me know. :)
Hmm... write about Annikki... N-no I couldn't. Two reasons, One i'm kinda not that good at writing... And second, I could never-ever take someones idea, espicially Annikki! (she reminds me a lot of Cherry!) I sure wish I could chat with her. Maybe she could help me out.
Very nice character, Annikki, you've created here. Might be nice, in her timeline, to visit Forbidden Dish. In the timeline, FD would be the first to have established a shrinking device and then it might have spread to the public as the portable device that Annikke has (but being very expensive, only select persons might have such a device). She wouldn't have much motivation to visit FD except from a nostalgic standpoint.
Anyway, enjoyed the story here. I still think, when a player wins the ultimate prize, they should also get the $1000 per question answered going to the favorite charity or next of kin.
So, I was envisioning Forbidden Dish actually being the trigger for the IVC universe. How many years between the opening of FD and the origins of the IVC universe would be the question. Perhaps decades. But, over time, it would certainly open up the public to shrinking technology in concert with vore.
Posted by bedfordsb 14 years ago Report
This was a really original and imaginatively constructed story. Really excellent!
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you! I had fun imagining Annikki and thinking the story up.
Of course, expanding the "IVC universe" beyond the IVC itself was originally your idea, and I'm sure your vore restaurant must have inspired me to a significant extent for this. So thanks for that. :)
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Wow. Amazing descriptive detail. I'd have been quite happy to lose that contest, hahah. Still, well written!
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you! Contestants usually compete to try and win, though. ;)
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Man, you are SO going to love my June Writer's Club submission. You really need to join the club, lol.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
I'll look forward to it! :) I won't be joining the club for now, though. I really don't want deadlines right now; I need to work at my own messy, stop-start pace.
Posted by atak 14 years ago Report
Bran is SUCH a lucky lucky guy to be her snack... I love how truly relaxed, casual, and uncaring she was about eating him; about him being a simple, and pure morsel of food for her to eat, digest, use up, and utterly forget about!
Murr, I wonder how quickly she forgets her willing little snacks?
If she really cares what her food experiences inside of her as she starts to digest it and use it all up; if it feels pain when she digests it?
I am also very curious how she treated those lucky two volunteers, if they got any more of a special time with her than the quiz show 'winners'? Murrr... She's a wonderful predatoress, and I am hoping to see more of her, and her sending people to their deaths as her simple mere food! ^^ Murr... Very exciting, VERY fun story!
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you!
I would assume the first two were eaten in the TV channel's building, where doctors were at hand to make sure there was no adverse reaction (that she didn't choke, or get immediate indigestion, or whatever). They were there for a supervised "test run", after all. I suppose Anni may have chatted with them a bit before eating, though.
To answer your other question, she doesn't think all that much about what happens to them after she's swallowed. She just enjoys the feel of them moving inside, and, later, the feeling she gets from knowing that they're still inside her. They were willing to be eaten, which enables her to focus on her own enjoyment without feeling guilty. ;)
Posted by atak 14 years ago Report
Hmm, I kinda suspected as much. Kind of a shame they didn't get to have even a slightly bit more of a special treatment from her before being eaten. Just there as a simple test, perhaps only getting to chat with her for a very short few minutes, before she ate them up... I am sure they were still happy to be her food though, and I am sure she was very happy to eat them up. That they were, in a way, perhaps even more food-like then the regular show contestants, since she spent so little time with them ^^.
Wonder if she ate them together?
Hee, that is always very wonderful to get to hear, even if it was what I thought! Murr, I wonder if that means she'd still eat people, if she suspected that it was painful to digest inside of her?
Murr, but I do love how, if they are willing, she sees them as simply food; items for her enjoyment. I particularly loved how she ate that one guy on a partially filled stomach. She didn't even mention it to him, much less care how he might feel about sharing her stomach with a bit of other food. She just ate him, and left him to his own devices while she digested him like the food he was to a girl like her ^^.
I bet she's quite a fun girl to get to be shrunk around in a much more intimate setting... I bet it'd be a very wonderful, if probably very short lived, experience to get to enjoy ^^.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
I don't think she swallowed them together, since she only needed to make sure she could swallow one person at a time. But she may have eaten them one just after the other, yes, and digested them together.
If someone confronted her with a graphic description of what digestion is like for a prey, she would probably stop eating people. She doesn't want to know. To her, it's supposed to just be fun, and enjoyable for everyone involved.
And you're right, she didn't give much thought to whether or not her prey would be bothered by landing in half-digested food in her stomach. It probably didn't even occur to her.
She's only just starting her "vore career", really. She's "only" eaten five people so far. As mentioned, she's not interested in doing private vores, for now. She turns down the people who volunteer to be her food. Maybe that'll change one day... or not; it'll depend how she feels. :)
Posted by atak 14 years ago Report
Hee, I am sure she did digest them together, for a matter of simple convenience for her and for the studio... They were merely her food. ^^ Hopefully it was still wonderful for them!
Mmm, I wonder if she'd ever care about her prey's desires with regard to landing in digesting food? If she'd even listen if someone didn't want to be eaten and made to digest along with other food?
And so, anything short of a graphic description of what happens to her prey, and she doesn't really know or care?
Hee, we can only hope she'll accept volunteers to be her food someday. I'm curious why she doesn't want them?
XD And I am very curious... How she'd react if she were relaxing, and some already shrunken person showed himself around her. Or perhaps, even tried to sneak into her food (and perhaps did a bad job of it)? Murr, is a fun thought I think!
Posted by Sarus 14 years ago Report
Excellent read, as usual :)
I just have one question: where do I sign up? :P
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Hehe... That's the difficulty, isn't it?
Thank you for your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
Excellent story, I really enjoyed this one.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
I'm glad you did. Thank you for the comment. :)
Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report
You have a real talent for writing. Your stories flow very well and you have good use of adjectives.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thank you very much. I sometimes wonder whether the adjectives make it sound heavy or clumsy, so it's useful to get feedback. Thanks! I'm working on other stories now, but not set in the IVC context.
Posted by naruto7568426 14 years ago Report
What a very well written and nice story! I find very amazing how you write. You write like no other, your writing even sometimes inspires me! It's amazing, i've never been inspired from reading before. *sigh* I sure wish I could be on the Vore Quiz. Or at least chat with Annikki. Do you think you could maybe arrange something...?
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thanks very much!
Unfortunately, I have no plans to write about Annikki again, for now. I have no ideas for her right now, and too many ideas for other things. But maybe one day.
Having said that, if you'd like to write about her yourself... well, just let me know. :)
Posted by naruto7568426 14 years ago Report
Hmm... write about Annikki... N-no I couldn't. Two reasons, One i'm kinda not that good at writing... And second, I could never-ever take someones idea, espicially Annikki! (she reminds me a lot of Cherry!) I sure wish I could chat with her. Maybe she could help me out.
Posted by Krisexy 14 years ago Report
bien imaginé ;P
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Merci! Je me suis pas mal amusé en l'imaginant.
Posted by Krisexy 14 years ago Report
haha doule sens ;P peut-etre meme triple ;P
Posted by FutaFan 13 years ago Report
Et sattuisi olemaan suomalainen ? =P
Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report
If that means "Do you speak Finnish", then the answer is no, sorry. ;) I just like to vary my characters' nationalities a bit.
Posted by FutaFan 13 years ago Report
Well that is good to know , i love to knoow that even somone knows that we still exist here .3. and btw i said are you from Finland
Posted by Krisexy 12 years ago Report
je la relisais comme ça et je viens de me rendre compte de l'intelligence du nom de Bran dans cette histoire ;P Bravo :)
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Merci. ;)
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
Very nice character, Annikki, you've created here. Might be nice, in her timeline, to visit Forbidden Dish. In the timeline, FD would be the first to have established a shrinking device and then it might have spread to the public as the portable device that Annikke has (but being very expensive, only select persons might have such a device). She wouldn't have much motivation to visit FD except from a nostalgic standpoint.
Anyway, enjoyed the story here. I still think, when a player wins the ultimate prize, they should also get the $1000 per question answered going to the favorite charity or next of kin.
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
Goodness, did I really create her all the way back in Story 22? Thirteen years ago! How time has passed.
She can't go to the Forbidden Dish, unfortunately, because she exists in the IVC universe, not the FD universe. ;) Thanks, anyway!
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
No crossing the streams, eh? (think Ghostbusters)
So, I was envisioning Forbidden Dish actually being the trigger for the IVC universe. How many years between the opening of FD and the origins of the IVC universe would be the question. Perhaps decades. But, over time, it would certainly open up the public to shrinking technology in concert with vore.