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The Gator Pop By xionzappa

Uploaded: 5 years ago

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Comments: 24

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Tags: Alligator Fatal Vore gator non fatal vore Soft Vore Transformation Edit

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Hello everyone! Vox's Posse here with another story! Recently I decided I'd like to start taking commissions and no more then 5 minutes after I announce it on a vore chat, Dingo became my first customer! :3 Thank you Dingo! He requested a story about a boy who goes to a pool party and undergoes a surprising transformation.

This story includes soft vore, fatal vore, non fatal vore, transformation and lots of belly play. Enjoy!

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YoshiDragon336

Posted by YoshiDragon336 5 years ago

Nice story i really enjoyed reading it

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

^^ Hee, thank you very much. Be sure to check out my other works. <3

YoshiDragon336

Posted by YoshiDragon336 5 years ago

will do pally

Herschal

Posted by Herschal 5 years ago

Great story! Wonderfully descriptive and anice concept (though I think I saw something very similar to it in a comic somewhere). I imagine Jimmy must've looked something like King Gator from All Dogs go to Heaven.

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

:3 Hee...maybe with less lipstick and no bone.

TristanHawthorne

Posted by TristanHawthorne 5 years ago

BIG LIPPED ALLIGATOR MOMENT

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

...Yes. Very yes.

LightSpeed

Posted by LightSpeed 5 years ago

Awwwwww, That was a great story. ^.^ I'd love to see a sequal made to this. ^.^

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

:3 Hee, well, out of pure curiosity, what would the sequel involve? Where would you like to see it go?

Entirely_Logical

Posted by Entirely_Logical 5 years ago

I actually have a very interesting idea. It goes like this. Summer's over, and everyone gets to go back to school. The pool incident is no longer anything more than a fond memory. The first thing that they notice is that there's a new kid. Everyone seems to love him, except for Jimmy. In fact, Jimmy hates his guts, and is incredibly suspicios of him. PM me if you'd like to hear more.

Entirely_Logical

Posted by Entirely_Logical 5 years ago

Suspicious*
Also, his suspicions intensify when some of the students go missing, including one of his friends, and even one or two of the teachers.

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

In the end, since this story was commissioned by someone, I'd like to leave it as it is unless that person wants more...

LightSpeed

Posted by LightSpeed 5 years ago

Hmmm, perhaps Jimmy meets up/goes to a convention involving other kids that ate those animal pops and arrange a kind of activity Day. Jimmy brings along his to the convention and I imagine it would lead onto vore scenes from there. ^^;

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

Well, remember, this man has given the pops to kids around the country. How would he explain to his parents he was going to this? I had a hard enough time making the plot believable as it was and if I did that, I think it'd go from being a story, to just an excuse for vore.

LightSpeed

Posted by LightSpeed 5 years ago

*his friends. Sorry, grammatical mistake. ^^;

LightSpeed

Posted by LightSpeed 5 years ago

You have a point. Sorry. V_V

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 5 years ago

Heh, don't be sorry. :3 It's just...I like writing vore, but I hate it when the point of a story is just vore. I like plots to be believable and motivations to be understandable. x3 A convention...there are too many holes. There may be a sequel, but it'll have to be something I can really fit with the story.

LightSpeed

Posted by LightSpeed 5 years ago

Ahh, ok. ^^ Can't wait to see if you do decide to do one. ^.^

DJScoots10

Posted by DJScoots10 3 years ago

I might have already commented on this, though i really liked this story and would love to see more like it. No pressure though. :)

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 3 years ago

You may just get your wish.

DJScoots10

Posted by DJScoots10 3 years ago

That sounds great. keep up the good work. :)

Primal Fire

Posted by Primal Fire 3 years ago

...This is going to sound pretty silly, but here goes. This story made me feel like a little kid again - that's the only way I know how to describe the feeling. Well done, sir, well done.

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 3 years ago

...As much of a complement as that is, it's really hard to take that in a non-psychotic way when someone has Eva-Beatrice as their avatar. <3

masterlevan1

Posted by masterlevan1 2 years ago

That was mean just killing bryan like that :(