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My other writing kiriban, this time for Miranda Dragon. (Thank you for your patience!)
7800 words, F/mff sex and vore. If you don't like scat references, stop when you get to "Eleanor's Story", otherwise, enjoy!
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Posted by miranda_dragon 14 years ago Report
Thank you again. I'm still gushing over how incredible this turned out...
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Houyo 14 years ago Report
I always get a little sad when I read a good vore story like this. Always feel bad for the prey. But still, it was hot.
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
<grin> It sounds like you had just the right emotional response!
Posted by Leika 14 years ago Report
Wow... that really was amazing. I aspire to someday write something that good.
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Thank you very much! That's quite a compliment!
Posted by Kitsuke 14 years ago Report
That was very good. I'm impressed.
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report
Murrrrrr, that's was a great story. ^.^ Nice back story to it too. ^^
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report
You're welcome. ^^
Posted by VixieMoondew 14 years ago Report
"Her came back to my breasts (thankfully she didn't squeeze them nearly as hard as she had her own),"
I will continue to be your post-submission editor until you throw me into a woodchipper. :3
Posted by Animakitty 14 years ago Report
Bravo! Excellent scene-setting. Good details that lead to immersion.
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Jocaste 14 years ago Report
Having been in and out of luck so many times (I've written so many stories, but none of them vore) You stand to me as a shining beacon, an example that greatness can be achieved, so long as you set your heart on it ... So thanks for a being a role model and what not *Decides not to send 8 more pages of mushy author-to-author admiration.*
Posted by 4ofSwords 14 years ago Report
Well, thank you! That's very flattering! :D
Posted by Shyguy9 12 years ago Report
Found myself reading this today and I have to say, I think it is one of my favorite vore stories ever. Seriously! Can't believe I never commented on it!
Anyways, just wanted to let you know. I don't often revisit stories the way I have this one.
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
<grin> I'm glad you did! Thanks!
Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report
Very nice sex scene...that was my favorite part :). Just like the last one of yours I read, an extremely good expression off the setting--I loved the way you quickly set up a city in the rain in an foreign country (this isn't a consistent universe you have set up, is it?). The rest of it is similar to your others: vore applied with a powerful sense of creepiness and seediness, again i dont know if it was your intention or not, but it really hit me with a powerful effect--the mark of an excellent writer.
Posted by 4ofSwords 11 years ago Report
Yup - this is the "Capital Cities" setting. Thanks for the kind words! :)