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Epsilon Side Story - Hope By xionzappa

Uploaded: 4 years ago

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Tags: Fatal Vore Raccoon Soft Vore Soul Vore Vore Edit

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Recently, a few people have criticized my stories (not intending any harm) by saying that my fatal vore stories don't make my readers really connect with the prey. The thing is, this is by choice. I know what it's like investing emotion into a character only to see him die. Kyto recently commissioned me and I decided that I'd do this one for the fans. Enjoy.

Warning - Contains underage yiff and fatal vore.

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MichaelGrey

Posted by MichaelGrey 4 years ago

Well, you definitely succeeded in making us connect, because I almost cried reading this. You definitely know how to make sadistic villains and sympathetic victims.

(Sighs)

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 4 years ago

Erk, sorry...didn't really want to upset anyone.

MichaelGrey

Posted by MichaelGrey 4 years ago

It's alright. When it comes to one-chappie stories like this, it's hard to find the right balance to turn a person into a genuine character, hard to find a way to keep people from becoming too involved or too little involved. All fan-work is a risk.

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 4 years ago

I'd always tried to make people distant from all my fatal prey. Some people liked another author's work because they did the opposite and someone mentioned they didn't think I was able to make believable, empathetic prey. This was to prove them otherwise...

MichaelGrey

Posted by MichaelGrey 4 years ago

You succeeded, my friend. Admirably.

Readasaur

Posted by Readasaur 4 years ago

...You...
...This story...
This story... was very well done.
It did what you intended.

xionzappa

Posted by xionzappa 4 years ago

*Smiles* I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Readasaur

Posted by Readasaur 4 years ago

I must say, I've never seen predators like yours before.

DJScoots10

Posted by DJScoots10 3 years ago

Well I hope something good comes to Jacob. It was a well written story.

spikedyson

Posted by spikedyson 3 years ago

... well writen but why would one want to get a kid to suck ones penis.... isnt this classed as pedophillia