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Shawna decides to show her new toy just what she can do...with the help of an attractive and potentially quite tasty male kitsune.
(Why yes, there IS vore in our vore story!)
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Posted by Misasura 13 years ago Report
Huh, vore in a vore story. Imagine that!
Posted by Misasura 13 years ago Report
Oh, hey! A Lord of the Rings reference, how did I forget that?
Posted by trh7323 13 years ago Report
I like the story so far...but one thing is sort of bothering me...it seems like the vores are near omnipotent...I know that stronger vores can appear and beat/eat the weaker ones...and there are the goddesses, of course.
But how about an ordinary mortal beating a vore...or love conquering hunger?
This is not a critique...just a hopeful suggestion...and again, I loved outfoxed part 1...and I am hoping to see this one go in that same direction...preferably with the girls getting together at the end.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report
Well, we'll take it under advisement.
Bear in mind, if the vores seem somewhat omnipotent...well, this IS wish-fulfillment. It's written not exactly from our hearts, but from somewhere a little lower down. Our characters aren't really evil, and they at least try to make sure their victims have fun too, but they can be awfully self-centered.
Posted by trh7323 13 years ago Report
Very true about the lower down part...but it would just be a little more fun to see what would happen if the little guy truly got the power...then again...my idea comes from watching anime for about 15 years.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report
Well, remember that the kitsune ball provides a good mechanism for such a thing to happen. And indeed that's how Outfoxed began. :) I'm just a little concerned that if I did such a thing again, it would turn into an Outfoxed clone, and I'd rather each story stand uniquely on its own merits.
But I'll let the idea percolate and maybe something will come of it.
Posted by sojonin 13 years ago Report
Maybe Shawna decides to allow Terrance back and mold him into a kitsune of her liking the second time around? She does enjoy bossing people around after all. (Maybe not that much though, lol!)Great stories so far, keep it up!
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Hmmm, this does give me ideas on where I'd like (read that prefer) domination of prey to go. Like the story mind you, my prey side gets to live through it, hehehe. But my pred side doesn't like it >_> And as they say, if you don't like how someone else drew/wrote it, do it yourself.
Although I am most curious about what will happen longer term to Xenia... i'm more curious as to what will happen long term with Shawna.
Posted by Darian 13 years ago Report
TW, I gotta say the Vore campus series has always captured my attention as vorish, but a little...
rose-colored.
I love the non-cruel dominance of some of your characters, but the submissiviness of your characters seems a little unreal at times.
I suppose it's a bad habit of mine, as over light things always inspire some rather dark story ideas and characters... The Vore goddess would have to be REALLY Omnicient an Omnipotent to keep her power out of the wrong hands, some people might have some extreme ideals against vores, and there might be some unfortunate souls caught in the experimental stages of the project...
still, I'm a sucker for happy endings. You've handled this dream world of yours rather well and more realistically than most. I can't wait to see more.
Posted by Misasura 13 years ago Report
If the submission seems unreal, then it's mostly me who is to blame. I tend to write characters who easily submit.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 13 years ago Report
Indeed. You wouldn't believe how often I had to say, "Could you PLEASE make her a little unhappier about this?" :)