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Tags: 8ft Alive Anthro Belly bull burgaler caught chew criminal Down fit Funny Giant gobbled Growl guard gurgle HAM Human hungru Invalid Tag job licked lips M/M Macro Micro Mouth muscled Museum mustard pat plot ring rub sandwich satisifed security Soft Vore Stomach Story strong Swallowed Swallowing tall Taste Teeth theft thief Throat Tongue Trapped unknowing Unwilling Whole
Bill is an 8ft Anthro Bull Security Guard with an ever-present hunger. Eric is a theif who wants something valuable. When the perfect crime is foiled by an innocent act, Eric finds himself in the most undesirable circumstance and Bill is suddenly no longer hungry.
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Posted by Star_Sage 13 years ago Report
A few phrasing choices I wouldn't have made, and the overtones of ostracism aren't stuff I normally touch, but overall, good descriptions, and nice characters.
Posted by ilbv 13 years ago Report
Glad you enjoy it.
please go into detail. I'd like to know so I can improve my writing skills.
And what's ostracism?