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Centaur's of the Northern Woods By roland

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A boy strays into the Northern Woods, against the advice of his sisters. On his adventures he's caught stealing by a centaur and pays for it in ways he couldn't imagine.

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roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

I thought I'd upload it before proof reading it fully. Some of my stuff has been delayed in the past because I never get round to checking it.

This is a new area for me but I'm a fan of Unicorns work and thought I'd have a go at creating some new scenarios. I toned down the animal aspect. They've got horses bodies but thats it, everything else is human. I'm not really the 'furry' type.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago

Interesting, I like it, particularly the descriptions of the boy inside the womb. Towards the end, I was half-expecting him to end up as a centaur foal.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thank you. I'm a big fan of your writing. Your stories were some of the first I read. The foal idea's a good twist. Perhaps right at the end his sister spots the start of a tail on him?

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago

That would be an interesting twist - something to show that he'd been changed by the experience. Also, it could lead to a sequel where the centaurs hear about it and decide to finish the job - possibly making good on the threat to take the sister too. The way you wrote this one, it seems as though the centaurs involved weren't quite sure they could do any of this, so an unexpected side effect that piqued their curiosity seems reasonable. Anyway, just some thoughts - I tend to favor some sort of change happening to anyone put into a womb, as you've probably noticed in my stories.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

It was great, I loved it. And there was quite a couple of mistakes

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Glad you enjoyed it too. Mistakes will be fixed as I go through it again. Dragon UB story next me thinks.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

You mean that one I`ve been waiting for? Yes Can`t wait to see it. When are you gonna post it love your work

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

You know if there was a part where you can put favorite artists or writers. You`ll be in my top 3 for writers

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Genuinely flattered. Thank you.

Kartong

Posted by Kartong 3 years ago

Wonderful story. Could you do a feet first next time?

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thank you. Feet first sounds like fun. Suggestions for a sequaI are welcome. Perhaps twin sisters should be involved.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

Yeah and will they get turned into babies or get set free

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Or set free changed into babies...

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thank you. I think you've managed to define what I couldn't: a personal principle. Borderline believability. A fantasy yet grounded.