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Nightmarish Hunger By TristanHawthorne

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Tags: Cutie Marks Digestion Everypony F/F Luna Multiple Prey My Little Pony Oral Vore Reformation Soul Capture Edit

One Tag Per Line!

Blame Bittersweet. I was commissioned.

...The commissioner said they couldn't clop to it because they thought it was too cute.

Princess Luna visits Ponyville before the Winter Moon Celebration, and meets with the Elements of Harmony, One at a time...

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SirScotty

Posted by SirScotty 3 years ago

Gotta admit, I saw this and was thinking "oh no, not MLP!"

But then I read it, and it wasn't horrible in any way shape or form. Good show!

TristanHawthorne

Posted by TristanHawthorne 3 years ago

I've had more inspiring comments than "not horrible" before.

Any other insights?

SirScotty

Posted by SirScotty 3 years ago

Sorry about that, I realized after the fact that it could have sounded better. :P

I actually really emjoyed the whole thing. Normally I'm put off by lack of explicit vore, but that wasn't the case here, as it was well written enough that the rest of the story more than made up for it.

Major points for keeping the characters consistent with the show. Reading it, I coulf fairly hear them talking, particularly Pinkie, which I couldn't help but laugh at.

All in all, a very good read.

TristanHawthorne

Posted by TristanHawthorne 3 years ago

I tend to prefer preserving some level of discretion leading to a reveal. In addition, the choice to have the Mane Six not know what was going on, and to have each vignette from their third person limited perspectives caused only Pinkie Pie's and Luna's views to have explicit descriptions of nomming.

That and since I'm more interested in male on male myself, I decided to stay sensual and stay away from sexual (even if I find vore inherently sexual)

SirScotty

Posted by SirScotty 3 years ago

I think lack of sexual content is a bonus in this instance. The major appeal (at least, to me) of the characters and the situations they get into is that it's "cute." Sexualizing it would pretty much destroy that unless you went to GREAT pains to avoid it, and at that point I don't think it'd even be worth doing.

Like it is though, you captured that feeling of cute almost perfectly. Definitely gets a stamp of approval.

unicorn

Posted by unicorn 3 years ago

Awesome, pony vore <3 We can always use more of this. And Luna is one of my favourite characters, so it's nice to see this story revolving around her.

Bittersweet

Posted by Bittersweet 3 years ago

As always a fantastic job. I really love how this turned out and you did a wonderful job keeping it within the spirit of the show and making it cute and cuddly.

Hermlover21

Posted by Hermlover21 3 years ago

I am not usually one for anything but humans, but i absolutely love this show, and this story was amazing! So sweet!

emalee

Posted by emalee 3 years ago

I can't clip to this Dx

emalee

Posted by emalee 3 years ago

*Clop

Kirah

Posted by Kirah 2 years ago

This is definitely an awesome story. One of the few out there which don't feature horribly graphic digestion.

TristanHawthorne

Posted by TristanHawthorne 2 years ago

Graphic Digestion is one of my turn-offs, along with gore, violence, and cruelty.

Kirah

Posted by Kirah 2 years ago

Guess that explains a lot. By the way, the tags imply that there's some sort of digestion going on, but the story seems to suggest otherwise. I know that Luna absorbed the power of the Elements, but what really happened to the Mane Six, though?

Kirah

Posted by Kirah 2 years ago

Never mind, figured it out. Maybe I should actually read the last few lines of the story, instead of me accidentally thinking I already read that.

TristanHawthorne

Posted by TristanHawthorne 2 years ago

Reformation was also one of the tags :P

Shirehorse7

Posted by Shirehorse7 1 year ago

Nice story i like Luna she's awesome