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A woodsman's pregnant wife and her daughters are visited at their village hovel one stormy night by a pair of malevolent female centaur's, hell bent on revenge for an account of murder against their tribe. Keen to execute their own brand of retribution they dispatch of the mother and her children in very slippery ways.

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roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

An updated version up to the insertion of the second girl. More to come for sure.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

Can`t wait to see more. Right now gonna read it. So got any other work coming up

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

It was great I can`t wait to see part two or another up data of it. Are the twins gonna become centaurs?

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thanks. The girls go in together but I've not been very good with the transformation thing. A bit too fantasy for me. My imagination doesn't go that far.

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

Well some people don`t show it more implied or some do when the body starts to kick and fliud fills in the womb and umbilical cord on thier bellybuttons

max123

Posted by max123 3 years ago

love the picture that goes with this

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thank you. Thought pictures might be good. The change of the site and the way the text files are displayed looks a little busy and confusing to me. Might try doing simple pictures for the other stories.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago

For transformation, I'd have the actual transformation happen off-camera, as I'm not inclined to try and work out a believable description of the process. I personally find it less believable for someone to spend any length of time inside another's reproductive system and not get changed somehow than to be transformed somehow, especially in a fantasy setting (centaurs). Even if that TF is just an umbilical cord or the like - realistically, there's no way the experience would be survivable without an air hose otherwise. That said, it's your story, so your artistic sensibilities should be the guide. One of these days I'll write a centaur unbirth story with transformation, but so far I haven't managed a plotline that works for me.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

I get your point about the air factor. That's something I've always been able to overlook. I think of it as in a dream when your underwater, you should drown but you don't yet there's no complexity of breathing the water etc. It just happens. If I can stretch that far, transformation doesn't seem out of reach. I'd love to read a centaur story from you. I like that excerpt of a story you posted about the transfer of an unbirthed victim, from one womb to another. It got me thinking about places to go with this story.

Electricwestern

Posted by Electricwestern 3 years ago

This is fantastic. I eagerly await the finished version.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Get ready for some more turns.

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 3 years ago

0 _ 0 !!!! WOW this is amazing. Never have I seen unbirth done so sexy! and wow, those centaurs are really mean! awesome story, can't wait to see what happens next! :)

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thanks. It's the power play that heats things up a bit I think. If both parties are up for vore, they might as well go order take-out. Predator and prey -- hooray.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago

Very nice so far - I look forward to seeing the final product

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

A pleasure to write for someone who's stories I've admired for so long. Thanks.

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 3 years ago

I'm definitley going to fave this and await more updates. Personnally I wouldn't do transformation, this could be made to effectivley be a prison sentence.

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 3 years ago

How much more can we expect?

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

I've got more to come but thought I'd wait to complete it before i post again. Thanks for the fave. Really glad u like it.

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 3 years ago

It's nice to see something so original, if unfinished.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thanks. I'll have a read over what I've done so far and see if I update in the next few days. Even if it's not 100% there. I've done a bit more than I thought I had actually.

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 3 years ago

A brilliant update. In fact, the only issue was a single misspelling of squelching.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

The one spelt 'spelch'? Haha. Found it in a few seconds.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago

Nice update. I quite like the detail you put into your descriptions of the inside of the centauresses. Also, I'll have to remember to check back occasionally for updates, as the portal doesn't seem to send a notification about them.

Terris

Posted by Terris 3 years ago

Hm. Well, I have to say that this one hit me between the eyes. Sexy and disturbing at the same time. Well done.

As an aside, I can't imagine the centaurs, being that angry, would unbirth those folks and not intend to end them. I gather from subtext that the father might be guilty only of self defense, which what makes what's happening to his family all the more tragic. It'd be sad if they all die (absorbed/digested). I suppose you have your plan, but I do hope they get rescued somehow.

The suggestion of unbirthing the pregnant mother and popping her in the process is innovative and shocking. But ultimately extremely disturbing to me. I'm curious as to where you take it.

Oh... by the by, maze should be spelled maize.

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

Thanks for reading. It's a pleasure to attract a large collection of my favourite writers to this post.

I'd admit it is pretty disturbing throughout, however all I can say is that neither transformation or digestion is my thing and the despicable nature of the centaur's crimes won't go overlooked.

I've nearly finished this one and'll give it the full proof read this time too. Maize I would have missed.

Terris

Posted by Terris 3 years ago

Are you a fan of the logs? :P I can't take full credit for them you know.

I do look forward to seeing how this concludes!

roland

Posted by roland 3 years ago

I'm a big fan of the logs ever since I read stories like 'Dumb Wolf Cockvore' three years back. Very humble of you to be appreciatively conscious of the collaboration behind them. They're shared works of course but posted by you which sort of makes you their representative.

lasserine

Posted by lasserine 3 years ago

Can it be transformation into a centauress? Have one of the twins become the back of the body, and another be the torso.

roland

Posted by roland 2 years ago

It's a good idea but sadly transformation isn't quite my thing. I like fantasy but just to the point of what I feel is believable. Transforming is just one leap too far for me. Sorry. x

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 2 years ago

Nice update, and a nice sense of guilt from the centaur.I assume just one more update.

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 2 years ago

This was a really good story it was bout sexy and disturbing and I am weary exited to find out what is going to happen next but I am curious to know if Hannah did become pregnant because of the really weird centaur sex ? another thing I am curious about is what were Evie and Layla going to do with the people they unbirthed when the were not going to turn them into centaurs ?

roland

Posted by roland 2 years ago

Thank you. It's a pleasure to see that you read the story closely. Hannah's pregnancy might be a mystery for some time. Lets give a couple of months at least to find out. As for Evie and Layla, I don't think either of them had a plan as to what to do after the fun. To be honest they could have let them go and been pretty confident no one would have believed the mother and her daughters story. Who would they want to tell it too. It would probably be a family secret that they buried together.

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 2 years ago

Thanks I am weary exited to read the next chapter

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 2 years ago

How is work on this going if you're still doing it?

vintious

Posted by vintious 2 years ago

Seemingly dead but, an alternate ending where husband is found guilty and those twins remain trapped within would be nice, or just a sequel involving more of that 69 position lesbian play would suffice.

kidclef

Posted by kidclef 2 years ago

I agree. I think I prefered it when the centauresses were somewhat in the right. I was picturing an ending with the two of them walking into the night scott-free with a dirty little secret and that appealled to me a bit more than them getting busted. Great story either way but yeah, Vintious is right an altrenate ending would be more my cup of tea.

Slider

Posted by Slider 2 years ago

Great story!

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 2 years ago

I really hope that you can continiue this story soon and I hope that you can use heavily pregnant victims in your future stories because not enough pregnant women gett vored

roland

Posted by roland 2 years ago

Thank you. I'll write more I'm sure. I agree -- pregnant vore is too rare.

Lobo

Posted by Lobo 2 years ago

Any luck?

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 2 years ago

I hope taht the next part of this freaking awesome vore story is coming soon and I just found this old vore story online and it reminds allot about this story here is a link http://mamabliss.com/stories/story_vampire_cow.html

roland

Posted by roland 2 years ago

I remember reading that story years ago before I even had a profile here. It's a good one I agree. Still not sure how to end the centaur story -- I've been playing with the ogre one more recently.

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 1 year ago

Yes I have read that story it was really but I really hope that you can continue this story really soon because I must know what happens next

roland

Posted by roland 1 year ago

I must admit I haven't visited the Centaur Story or thought about it for a long time. I think I felt it's conclusion was very close but it would be satisfying to complete it and close the cover on that one.

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 1 year ago

Nice I am weary exited to see what you are going to come up with and I really hope that you can use Evie Layla amy and Hannah in some of your future stories

ILLEGAL ALIEN 93

Posted by ILLEGAL ALIEN 93 1 year ago

So how is it going with writing the conclusion to this story ?

Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 6 months ago

any chance for an update?

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 1 month ago

Properly? :)