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M/f (and some F/m) blatant sex and vore. Bull on zebra (on lizard). 7.2k words
It's not very often I wake up with an urge to write M/f vore - but thinking about Thera is the one thing that puts me in the mood. Who better to star opposite Thera than MirandaDragon's own Jacob?
It -is- unfortunately often that I start writing what I think will be a 2.5k word story and end up closer to 7.5k. I apologize in advance. This probably isn't my best work - the writing is a bit weak and Thera is a hopeless caricature of a stereotype - but one has to to jump on these urges whenever they pop up in their pants.
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Posted by nephilim 12 years ago Report
This is way outside of my realm of interest... but something about it, some off-handed comment or sentence drew me in.
I rather like the universe you created - it is very intriguing! Citizen papers, licenses what have you. And they speak the "Capital" tongue. That's awesome.
I liked the characterizations and the dialogue and the repartee. Of course I'm partial to the M/F and this satisfied that element really well! The sex was raunchy and titillating. And the vore was strangely satisfying!
I'm going to have to look at your other works also...
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
Thanks! You won't find too much else in the M/f realm, though, I'm afraid. I'm glad you liked this at least!
Posted by Jack 12 years ago Report
Oh my gosh. M/F vore from 4ofSwords? Really? Unbelievable.
I am definitively going to savour this, when I am back at home lateron. Sooo great. Hope you get your mood swings more often in the future. *winks*
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
<grin> I hope you liked it!
Posted by Jack 12 years ago Report
I have read it now, and I can only repeat: Lo-ve-ly. Please more of those kind.
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
<grin>
Posted by ButtPlug 12 years ago Report
huh....
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
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Posted by ButtPlug 12 years ago Report
didn't see that one coming....
Posted by 4ofSwords 12 years ago Report
Ahh. :)
Posted by Sinikka 9 years ago Report
Very well written characters. It's not easy to portray someone like Jacob, I've read a few professionally published authors that botched the attempt. Keep writing, Swords, whatever flavor you choose.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate that! I didn't know anyone else had taken a stab at writing Jacob yet - do you know where I can take a look?
Posted by Sinikka 9 years ago Report
Not Jacob precisely, just a male lead that's dominating without turning into Snidely Whiplash. Currant Lennart comes to mind if you're familiar with the Kate Daniels series. worth a google if you like supernatural romance novels.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
Ahh... makes sense! With Jacob, my trick was just an exaggeration of what I normally do anyway when I write Miranda's characters - write them like tarot cards or horoscopes. Include details that seem to point strongly at a personality, without actually spelling it out, so they can be read a number of ways. That was a good lesson for me to learn, even though I've been told it a thousand times - if you show an evocative outline of a shadow, readers will frequently fill in the rest themselves with better than I could write.
Male preds are difficult for me, so I really appreciate the compliment. :)