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Pinkie decides to take her friends Twilight and Dash to a night club she knows about that has a rather unique gimmick.
Halcyon, Blackberry Shine, and Strawberry (c) Pop the Balloon Pup/Maple Gleam
Trissie cameo (c) me, duh
Twilight, Pinkie, and Rainbow Dash (c) Hasbro, as developed by Lauren Faust
Pop and I had had this character Halcyon for a while, complete with her internal club, but it wasn't until I saw that... basically suicide party fic with giantess Vinyl Scratch that I decided to write something like this, so that I wouldn't just be complaining that it wasn't something I liked, I'd be creating my own content.
And my OT3 kinda seeped in.
Though I'm not sure if I did enough for the PinkiexTwi leg of the triangle.
May fix that later.
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Posted by AMemeticHazard 11 years ago Report
A little bizarre, but sweet. Just what I needed to mend my psyche after the suicide party fic. You know the worst thing about that story? The worst thing is not that those ponies were ok with acidic suicide, but that society was ok with it. In other words, the entire court was out of order.
Posted by TristanHawthorne 11 years ago Report
I'm glad that I was able to help in that way. That makes it worth the time and effort I put into this :3
Posted by peteian 11 years ago Report
Besides, what fun is there in making sense?
Posted by peteian 11 years ago Report
WAIT. I read it the wrong way. I am an idiot. Sorry. But about that fic, I asked the author if Vinyl revives them, since if she digested all the Ponies then she'd run out of customers, and author said make your own ending. So in my headcanon Vinyl revives them.
Posted by vakrata 11 years ago Report
Same here. Makes a certain amount of sense... Who would think of that method without first hand experience?
Posted by Beany_one 11 years ago Report
Holy crap this is awesome. I would love to see more if you ever feel up to it.
Posted by TristanHawthorne 11 years ago Report
I was thinking of perhaps doing another one from Rainbow Dash's point of view, a continuation of this story.
Anything specific you'd like to comment on it?
Posted by Beany_one 11 years ago Report
Well, you inadvertently did something I've always loved and rarely seen (nonfatal, gentle same-size with no bulge), so that alone is a plus. But your descriptions and the way you paced everything made it even better. Especially amusing that you made so much of the story focus on Twilight trying to process what was going on.
Also I like your subtle nod to the blind bag shinies.
Posted by TristanHawthorne 11 years ago Report
I enjoy same size no bulge on occasion, though I also like it when there are bulges, but only when the prey moves!
And yeah, I'm pretty much a nonfatal kinda guy. Even when I have digestion/absorption involved, there's gonna be reforming of some kind for everyone to come back (And do it again and again)
YES.
I DID THAT ON PURPOSE.
*Scrunchymuzzle*
Posted by Beany_one 11 years ago Report
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH
GETTIN' EXTREME IN HERE
And yeah, I noticed that from your other story (which I read a while back and really liked as well). Bulges are great if the prey's squirming, but there's just something unusually and deliciously bizarre about same-size with no bulge.
Anyway, grimdark pony stuff just doesn't seem to fit anyway. Certainly not my cup of tea. And now I need to get off my lazy ass and finish captioning the episodes. My deaf fans NEED ME.
Oh look, shiny ponies.
Posted by TristanHawthorne 11 years ago Report
Well, in the other one, Luna was absorbing them each up, and holding their minds/souls safely inside her, to be put back in replacement bodies once she was done with them. Or at least, that was my intention.
Gotta be better than the captions Youtube does.
Oh look.
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/maplegleam/
Shiny Ponies.
Posted by Beany_one 11 years ago Report
Yeah. I certainly gathered that they were going to be more or less safe. (It made the ending funnier, too. Dat Trollestia.)
I used to have a lot of people come to my Youtube page for the captions I made, but I was one of the guys that got hit with takedown notices a while back when those NCF buttfaces were running around reporting everyone. Now I just host them on Dailymotion semi-secretly, but I invest a hell of a lot of time in them since even the show's official captions aren't that great for an actual deaf person. I can show you if you're interested.
Oh god totally bookmarked. Thank youuu.