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Rarity may seem like a normal Unicorn but she has devious and delicious fetish.
(This was written in the course of about 45 minutes while i was drinking. If you like and would like to see more stories like this please leave a comment below suggesting who she should eat next.)
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Posted by marader4 10 years ago Report
This is odd, and not quite whether to say continue or not
Posted by miranda_dragon 10 years ago Report
I rather liked the idea and tone here.
But, I think it would be worthwhile to give it a few passes for cleanup. Lots of grammatical issues throughout.
Posted by Hermlover21 10 years ago Report
Now that I'm sober and not hiding from the sun I'll probably end up doing so.
Posted by Speisenkarte 10 years ago Report
Who's next?
Posted by Dracon_Kitsune 10 years ago Report
Hmm, might I suggest Applejack next?
Posted by sportscarfan18 10 years ago Report
You should have her eat twilight sparkle next.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I wish this had continued, it had so much potential and other than a few errors, was written great.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Thanks for granting that wish for the rest of us.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report
You're welcome, writing it is fun. I intend to formally check in here once I take care of some things that have piled up over the near-month without the internet, and then get some writing done!
Posted by coolbreeze 8 months ago Report
I keep coming back to this story, and its sequels written by VoraciousSincerity. I just feel there is something really special about the idea of Rarity wanting to eat her friends, and that they would agree with it. Pinkie seems like a logical first choice to go, she would think it was fun.