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The fourth page of the vore comic I've commissioned from Just-A-Little-Vore on Deviantart. All credit goes to her for the artwork. Scenario is inspired by a past commission. Felicia belongs to Little Vore. Stephanie is a original character commissioned by me.
Edit: Motivated by criticism and her desire to improve, LV redrew Felicia and her stomach in the second-to-last panel of this page. Her efforts were obviously not in vain, and I'm quite pleased about how "phat" Felicia came out this time. ^_^
Link to the original artist: http://just-a-little-vore.deviantart.com/
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Posted by NekoYuki 10 years ago Report
Is this kne gonna have a bonus page like the previous. Just curious as I like to save comics in order on my iphone~
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 10 years ago Report
I'm not sure. We had an agreement that if she could fit the comic smoothly into 4-5 pages, she could keep the difference for the 6-page plan as a tip, but I did mention the idea of maybe "surprising" me with a bonus page or something. We'll just have to wait and see. I think she mentioned that she had 2 of the 5 pages colored two days ago, so it sounds like she has something special planned. Again, we'll just have to wait a bit and see.
Posted by NextBowlMovement 10 years ago Report
Love this!
I enjoy seeing more implied scat scenes from this artist ^^
Posted by SomeGuy1294 10 years ago Report
Um.
I hate to say this, really, but the quality of the art, particularly the anatomy, absolutely fell apart in the last shot of the mom. Her stomach, which up until now, had a lovely round shape, now just looks like a drunken stack of pancakes, not a stomach. I guess the artist was attempting to depict rolls of fat, but the shapes at the top are too blocky, broad and unnatural.
The position of her arms is also unclear, and the porta-potty in the background is at an angle for no real reason.
I know my critique may have come on a little strong, but I was absolutely shocked by the sudden drop in the quality of the art. Everything up until now looked gorgeous, and to have the art suddenly plummet is supremely disappointing.
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 10 years ago Report
Um... Now that you've mentioned it, I kinda noticed that change, but I didn't give it that much thought. Perhaps I should talk to LV about that...
Posted by SomeGuy1294 10 years ago Report
I would. You said this was a commission, right? I'd make sure I got my money's worth. No offense meant to LV.
Posted by SomeGuy1294 10 years ago Report
WOW! Her belly is vastly improved.
Glad to hear I helped motivate and artist.
Posted by ChaosMaker4291 10 years ago Report
Yeah. For a moment there, I thought she'd dropped my commission and gave me the middle-finger, but apparently what you and I said was enough to motivate her into improving her skills as an artist that much more. Thanks for your help.
Posted by SomeGuy1294 10 years ago Report
No problem. Any time you need me to complain about stuff, I'll be right there.