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Raan Quest: The Hunt for the Brouda By Ilkay

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Tags: Avian Brouda Cooking genderfuck H/F Hyena Implied Digestion implied hard vore Oviposition Pregnancy pseudopenis Sex Soft Vore Unwilling Prey violence Edit

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My submission for Terraah's latest writing contest, (http://aryion.com/forum/blog.php?b=14490)

Raan belongs to Terraah

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Terraaah

Posted by Terraaah 1 year ago

Hmhm!! Very good!! It was a very nice story!! There is no such thing that is a good story without variety!! Luckily yours had lots of it!! X3

SO!First of all! Raan was written quite well indeed! Im glad you asked if you could write about her.

I also LOVED the loltastic moments with the stupid NPC's XD That was a lot of fun. Although other from those, the whole game aspect wasnt very strongly showing in the story. Its important to have a balance for the story afterall! This time it was leaning a lil more to the kinky side. Although im not saying thats necessarily a bad thing. XD I found it nice n sexy! So kudos for that.

Raan even kinda.... WON THE GAME!!...Even tho she ended up as a dinner. XD That was a pretty funny ending. I like mai stories with sum humor!! So good job!!

So in overall! It was a very nice entry!! Ill post a link to it on my journal here! So that other contestants will be able to read it too!!

Thankies for entering mai contest!! AND GOOD LUCK!

Ilkay

Posted by Ilkay 1 year ago

I VARY am glad you like it! The thing i was moiust worred with was getting Raan right, and from what you are saying, I did.

Yeah i was not shure how to make it seem like it was FF like game once the fight started. And the ending came to me as i was rereading her bio.

Thank you for letting m write her it was vary fun.

Errata

Posted by Errata 1 year ago

Haha, quite good! Loved the NPCs talk. Very nice ending. Maybe Raan had an extra life all along. :P

Ilkay

Posted by Ilkay 1 year ago

Thank you, I am glad you liked it. And I like the way you think!