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Raan Quest: The Hunt for the Brouda By Ilkay

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Tags: Avian Brouda Cooking genderfuck H/F Hyena Implied Digestion implied hard vore oviposition Pregnancy pseudopenis Sex Soft Vore Unwilling Prey violence Edit

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My submission for Terraah's latest writing contest, (http://aryion.com/forum/blog.php?b=14490)

Raan belongs to Terraah

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Terraaah

Posted by Terraaah 1 year ago

Hmhm!! Very good!! It was a very nice story!! There is no such thing that is a good story without variety!! Luckily yours had lots of it!! X3

SO!First of all! Raan was written quite well indeed! Im glad you asked if you could write about her.

I also LOVED the loltastic moments with the stupid NPC's XD That was a lot of fun. Although other from those, the whole game aspect wasnt very strongly showing in the story. Its important to have a balance for the story afterall! This time it was leaning a lil more to the kinky side. Although im not saying thats necessarily a bad thing. XD I found it nice n sexy! So kudos for that.

Raan even kinda.... WON THE GAME!!...Even tho she ended up as a dinner. XD That was a pretty funny ending. I like mai stories with sum humor!! So good job!!

So in overall! It was a very nice entry!! Ill post a link to it on my journal here! So that other contestants will be able to read it too!!

Thankies for entering mai contest!! AND GOOD LUCK!

Ilkay

Posted by Ilkay 1 year ago

I VARY am glad you like it! The thing i was moiust worred with was getting Raan right, and from what you are saying, I did.

Yeah i was not shure how to make it seem like it was FF like game once the fight started. And the ending came to me as i was rereading her bio.

Thank you for letting m write her it was vary fun.

Errata

Posted by Errata 11 months ago

Haha, quite good! Loved the NPCs talk. Very nice ending. Maybe Raan had an extra life all along. :P

Ilkay

Posted by Ilkay 11 months ago

Thank you, I am glad you liked it. And I like the way you think!