Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report

Nice descriptions. Althuogh I'm left a bit more curious as to the prey's experience.

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thanks. Well, as you can see, this one focused on the pred, who herself could only wonder what her prey experienced in the end.

Posted by 00000 10 years ago Report

YESSS! Fantastic!

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thank you; glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by VORPHIL 10 years ago Report

LOVE IT

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by mojo-2131285 10 years ago Report

Probably the first time I've ever seen a shy pred truly well done.

Wonderful as usual!

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thank you very much.

Posted by Marked 10 years ago Report

Very nice story. I quite liked the dicotomy between how shy Sandra was acting in the restaurant compared to how she acted at the hotel. So sneaky, the way she avoided some of the questions. I have to say my absolute favorite part was the scene of her relaxing in the hotel and just enjoying the digestion, as I could really identify with it.

Anyway, one thought I had about the setting is that if someone went to the forbidden dish as prey, they would probably already have a type of person in mind they would want to eat them. I found it just a little odd that the norm seemed to be to pick up a random pred in the bar; I would have expected setting a "blind date" or in house matchmaking service at the very least, and probably a fair number of preds and preys meeting online to set up a date. If I were going to be prey, I wouldn't leave who was eatting me to chance, but that's just me.

Anyway, thank you for another fine story.

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

It's true that there's no "matchmaking" (interesting thought!), but pred and prey do have to agree on each other. They can take the time to talk and assess their compatibility.

Thanks! Yes, shy, innocent-looking Sandra had a devious streak. I enjoyed writing that "relax and digest" scene, so I'm glad it was enjoyable to read!

Posted by atak 10 years ago Report

Love the story! Very well done! So fun getting to read and learn about Sandra. See how eager she was to find herself a prey to eat. I really loved how she seemed just, soooo focused and eager for the chance to eat a girl, to have another someone inside of her stomach. She didn't really seem the least bit interested in learning about her future meal. And I like how she didn't bother at all to tell her anything of what to expect! Of how her stomach was full of eaten fish, of how she was going to go back to have sex with her boyfriend afterwards, or how her favorite part would be pooping her meal out... (Which BTW, I really loved getting to read. How she took such enjoyment out of pooping her meal out, and didn't even lock the door. Made me think she might have been wanting her boyfriend to peek on her perhaps...).
But I really just liked how she was only eager for her own side of the enjoyment, and didn't seem to really care at all about how it might affect her "volunteer". Can only imagine how her lucky meal felt about everything that happened, if it was anything even close to what she expected or cared for... Not that it mattered to Sandra!

Awesome awesome story loved it!

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Sandra, indeed, was not *entirely* what Chelsea expected from their initial encounter. There was a side to her that Chelsea only discovered after plopping into her already full stomach! And possibly hearing Sandra's greatest fantasy during the latter's love-making with her boyfriend...

I wanted, for once, to write a pred character who really enjoys the "end part" of vore. ;)

Posted by srimak 10 years ago Report

I wouldn’t mind the least if you dwelled on this particular subject for twice, or trice or more times. ;) Excellent story!

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thank you! :)

Posted by atak 10 years ago Report

Heh heh, I do quite wonder if Chelsea came to regret her choice in predators. From the quite full stomach with so many fish, to how her predator had lovemaking with her boyfriend afterwards, and everything else. It must have felt quite the ignoble fate being inside her, as she was having such sensual pleasure while digesting her all up without even any hesitation or remorse or care. It probably wasn't nearly as pleasurable or enjoyable for Chelsea as it was for Sandra. Though, I do find I like it sometimes when the pred has sex as they're digesting someone. And I quite loved how she eagerly dwelled on the "end part" of the vore ^^

Posted by ElPortero 10 years ago Report

This is amazing, and my mind goes absolutely crazy thinking about it from the prey's POV. Incredible job really nailing the sensuality of the experience!

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thank you! Yes; it must have been quite an experience for the prey. I'm glad if it had such an effect! :D

Posted by Ray 10 years ago Report

I loved it! I do wish we had gotten a detailed account of the prey's experience, but I suppose we got enough info to imagine it ourselves. Maybe it's better that way

Sex with a tiny in the belly is the best

Posted by French_snack 10 years ago Report

Thanks! Yes, I chose to focus on the pred's perspective: she can only imagine what her food is experiencing, and therefore so can the reader.

A tiny in the belly certainly served as an aphrodisiac for these two! ;) And I can't say I'd have minded being in Brandon's place.