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The final piece to the story, all is revealed. Thanks everyone for reading, for my first story I was very happy with the results. I also greatly appreciate the positive feedback you all gave me.
If this gets 15 favorites in the next 2 weeks, I'll start working on my next story right away. If not, I think I'll take a month or two off from writing because school starts back up soon.
Also, feel free to leave a suggestion if you have an idea for a story you want me to write up. I can't guarantee that I will, but I'll consider whatever it is you have to say.
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Posted by peteian 10 years ago Report
>They all knew they tasted delicious
Except for Trixie apparently XD
Posted by Beany_one 10 years ago Report
This was absolutely fantastic, with quite a silly ending. I loved the interactions, all the descriptions, and of course the silly.
Though...it was a bit confusing at the point where they were plopped out of the hydra's belly. All your descriptions amounted to "you can see through the hydra," not any indication that they could move through. I love the image of them falling to the ground from being where they were, though!
Whatever you do, don't burn yourself out. If you need to take a break, go ahead and take it. School is more important than vore, after all.
Posted by apples323 10 years ago Report
Sorry, I suppose that part was a little confusing. I meant to say invisible in sight, then transparent in matter after that. I had trouble conveying that idea bit lol. Thanks for all your feedback man.
Posted by Vigilante_2470 10 years ago Report
Wait, what?
That doesn't make sense... Feeling Pinkie Keen was a season one episode...
You're applying Season three/four continuity to an event that happened PRIOR to said continuity!
I... I just...
FAIL!
Posted by apples323 10 years ago Report
I know I kind of jumped around a bit on the continuity scale, but in fairness there's no written rule about what direction I take or how I decide to tell the story. Besides, it's a vore fiction after all. I'm not a writing for the show or anything like that.
Posted by PonyThroat 10 years ago Report
Loved it.