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4/23/14
Snow White
Blacks On Disney 1.1
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Posted by BardicLasher 10 years ago Report
Good story, but the tag should be F/F for the actual vore rather than the sex.
Posted by Binge 10 years ago Report
Good catch. Fixed
Posted by backgroundnoise 9 years ago Report
Warning: personal opinion, feel free to ignore.
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So Snow White just gets transformed into fat and shit? No bigger tits, rounder ass, anything? Doesn't that seem like a bit of a waste*?
*No pun intended.*
I don't mean to be rude or anything, it's just that this feels more like an interracial sex story with vore tacked on to add an element of lite-snuff than an actual vore story.
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*And now back to the actual (amateur) review.*
Aside from that that it's not bad, I like your writing. If I had one legitimate complaint (aside from the opinion piece above, which I would hardly consider 'legitimate') it's that the females could have done with more description. From the description I know what Snow White is wearing... and that's about it, I pretty much just have to transplant an image from the movie and copy paste it in the outfit you described.