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Mitch has been living with all sorts of private abuse from his much stronger brother Derek for a while now. But it gets that much worse when Derek starts somehow eating people.
WARNINGS: This story contains plenty of unsavory content including incest, brother-to-brother exploitation, abusive, homophobic character, and it's pretty dark when I get down to it. If you've got trauma around anything like that or it just squicks you, reader discretion is advised.
Posted by Jrrrobert 9 years ago Report
I really like your work. That was...dark. I like sadistic preds, but rarely is the emotional element built up so thoroughly. I'd say this was just on the brink of what I could handle...but I liked it, even if I'm hesitant to admit it to myself.
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Posted by Malus 9 years ago Report
The general theme and the end sequence (Mitch's final efforts and his fate) were very erotic and to my liking, but I admit, I generally dislike preds like that.
I don't know, cruelly sadistic preds (as opposed to rough andbdominant and even violent preds) make me feel strongly defiant, not submissive.
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Posted by smukmave 9 years ago Report
Wow. You were right, I did like this. A lot. :P
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Posted by dragonkingdc 9 years ago Report
i like this, how about you make one were richard is the pred
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Posted by tomros 9 years ago Report
After reading it I though that I must say what I think. I think that this the best vore story I have ever read!!!! It is so erotic. I must say that I've read a LOT of stories in my life but never read the same story as many times as that one. I'd love to read the secon part about Derek's college. Maybe from his point of viev? I wish that you could continue it.
Thanks again it is awsome !!!!
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Posted by Kooshmeister 9 years ago Report
This'll be the third time I've cum to this...
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Posted by LunarOwlBoy 9 years ago Report
Oh gods i really wish i had read the warning when i first found this story...really messed me up....but i do have to appreciate how well it is written...now back to attempting to erase certain scenes of this from my mind
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Posted by mallowsal 8 years ago Report
maybe do a reverse where mitch is the pred? same relation but mitch gets the upper hand?
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Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report
Sometime I might do a different story where the younger brother turns out to be the pred. I have thought about that, though probably with completely different characters.
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Posted by mallowsal 7 years ago Report
ah alrighty
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Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report
I have actually, the story is pretty much in my head, but it's a matter of finding the right time to be able to get it out. :)
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Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report
Without spoiling too much, will probably involve Derek going to college, being a big frat bro, and maybe finding out he's not the only pred out there.
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Posted by Kelly 5 years ago Report
Holymoly that was bloody amazing
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Posted by frogcubus 4 years ago Report
I keep coming back to this one. My god, this pushes buttons I didn't even know I had when I found it.
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Posted by the_Wolf 4 years ago Report
Thanks, happy to hear this story is hitting right for you on multiple runs.
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Posted by johaku99 3 years ago Report
Read this alot love it I've gotten off to this alot as it is very well Written
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliment. I'm always a bit surprised to hear how people come back to this one, and always glad it's giving folks pleasure.
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Posted by johaku99 3 years ago Report
I've read alot of your stories this one is my favorite
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