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I'm toying with having some less 'true uncorrupted hero' girls both with and against me. Is it working?
Maria. She's goign to need to be renamed and I am tempted to go with Tinkerbell for her. Maria is very much against it which is why I want her to have it. Anyone got a better idea and a reason for it?
who or what is going to be answering Syndra's prayers? some longforgotten lovecraftian horror and his/it's summoner (for anyone that knows my characters: Kiri and Bob)
or should it be the action hero that plops in with weapons drawna dn just starts shooting up everything? (Ice or Lycinda)
somethign third? Ria? want to suggest a character?
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Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
YAY! Glad to see you've returned to the community.
As for the questions... 1) I think it's working so far. 2) I feel that the name 'Tinkerbell' is too stereotype... plus the super soldier thing... maybe use it as a teasing nickname. 3) Haxx? :P jk, do what you want.
Again, nice to see you back.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
hey.
You can leave but you can never leave.
any attempts will have you get eaten, carried back and spit out here.
1) I am glad to hear that.
2) agreed. It is to really ennoy her, like: 'hey trinkerbell?' 'call me that again, and I'll forcefeed you your spine'
3) I borrowed a friend's haxorus based character.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12325509 She is a bit scary looking.
and thanks again for the warm welcome. Glad I was missed.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
Huh... didn't expect my mention of haxx to result in a Haxorus...
Anyway, I think I may have a few more characters... but they still need some 'fleshing out'. Also: I think there were two points where you messed up on a name. Twice I saw Enchin, but I think it was supposed to be Enkrow? *shrugs* I'll let you know once these new characters get their skins, if you're interested.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
I think it's just luck.
I borrowed her from a friend that wanted help fleshing out her personality.
sure, tell me what you get when you get them fleshed out.
and very likely. I probably got the wrong name for him again. Give it time and I'll hopefully remember his name.
also, do Enkrow have any named generals or just people under him.
And last, any assassins?
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
As of now, Enkrow has no named generals, commanders, captains, or lieutenants. As for Assassins... If you mean Imperial, I can probably use that as a basis for one of my 'unfinished'. If you mean Assassin-4-Hire type, I am working on one. Hmm... maybe I can use some of these 'unfinished' for a few named I-TAC officers... most of his soldiers are andriod types, though he does have a few unnamed communications officers.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
oh, I was just asking and wondering because I wanted to flesh out the villains I got and just figure out what to do.
and well, Riannah is a former assassin from the assassin's guild. The problem is just that you just don't 'leave' the assassin's guild so there's a few assassins that really want ehr dead, and cash in the bounty on her head.
And now you know.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
Ah.... Well, one of my previously unfinished characters IS an assassin.... a political assassin to be precise. That means she only targets people such as government officials, military officers, ect. and is usually hired by those same people. Politics, more like professional trash talking :P
Since I'd figure you're always looking for more gals, I guess I can relay the details... though before that I must apologize for her 'human-like' appearance... I just couldn't think of anything else that would work.... Then again, seeing that whole DNA splicing place you've introduced... It's more.. plausible. Just let me know if you're interested, if so, I'll throw in Enkrow's Lieutenant as well >:3
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
hey, she sounds right up my alley.
and don't worry too much about her humanlike apparance.
I got a character that's called Erica. She's a redhaired human.
also, sure. let he see/know more about those two.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
Alright, I'll start with the humanoid. Remeber how I said she was 'human-like'? Well, that's because she's a thunder elemental named Iota. Iota has glowing (yes, it literaly glows) golden hair and eyes, while her skin is quite pale. Being a thunder elemental, she can manipulate electrical energies at will, ranging from simply using them as a radar, to being able to do things like electrocute a few squads worth of troops, even creating electrical storms. As for attire, she usually wears a grey tanktop/sport top with navy blue pants.
As for Enkrow's lieutenant, that would be a Lopunny named Azuka, whom while obedient, can be ruthless. She is also skilled in multiple forms of martial arts as well as firearms.
And now, some fun facts.
*Opal knew Iota AND Azuka before being taken to the Imperial research facility
*Naomi and Opal are the only two members of Phantom to drink (as in beer) but only Opal gets drunk :P
*Opal has two sisters, named Topaz and Strawberry. The three also have nicknames, being Pez, Strawz, and Oops for Topaz, Strawberry, and Opal respectivly.
Ironicly enough, Naomi, Enchidna, Var, Calx (to an extent) and Sachi (again, to an extent) were human to begin with, but as I did not know your standing on the including of humans, I altered their characters a bit.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
sounds good. More characters, both good and evil are always nice.
Azuka sounds a bit scary. Interesting, but rather scary. I think she'll ed up being one where i keep trying to convert her to my side, but it just won't work..
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
Probably... even in my mind, she tries to kill her 'former' friends....
Though now that I know of available variety, I have that much more freedom with my characters... just wish I knew this beforehand :P
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
yeah, she gives off that kind of feel.
hey, better late than never, right?
Also, what do Iota want? like is she just interested in meeting up with her old frineds or does she want to be worshipped like a smaller/less powerful goddess?
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
The 'meet old friends' part is more likely, the worship thing, definetly not her.
I'm currently working on fleshing out a more 'human' character atm, one that uses a more combat oriented form of alchemy. I'll let you know what I come up with.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
sorry for taking this long but I got distracted again.
also, thanks for all the info.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
No Problem, stuff happens.
Anyway, once I get the transmutation alchemist ready, I think I'll throw in a certain 'deceased' character of mine, since there's more than one way to revive the dead...
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
sounds good.
The next chapter should be coming up tomorrow, hopefully.
And I am looking forward to those two.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
Alright. Lotta letters and words.
I'll start with Vajra, a half-human, half-demon transmutation alchemist. As suggests, she is able to change on physical medium to another (i.e. trasforming a brick into a small statue). The whole 'can turn copper into gold' thing also applies. (To be honest, I didn't add much else, so I'll give creative freedom to you on this one.)
Next up is Kody, Naomi's 'dead' daughter. Unlike her mother, Kody appears human... well, besides the obvious feathered wings. She can normally be seen wearing a teal dress similar in design to her mother's. As for why Naomi thinks she's 'dead', well, Opal lied. Kody barely survived the cruelty of the Imperial scientists and, after Opal destroyed the place, had her older sister, Strawberry, watch over the 'dead' angel. :P (Kody has black hair and green eyes)
I also thought I'd add in that Naomi is a 'retired' (and feared) member of the Assassin's Guild, her alias being the 'Angel of Blood' since she'd only take on the most dangerous, high-risk tasks (y'know, the ones labeled as 'suicide missions'). Suffice to say, the Assassins Guild couldn't really say no when she left.....
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
I get to decide somewhat what Vajra looks like? I mean, I know she's a human/demnon mix but I get to decide other than that?
She sounds interesting, actually.
What do Cody think about her mother? And why did Opal lie anyway?
is it because Cody doesn't like her mother?
interesting. That's another thing her and Riannah has in common. That gives me more ideas to play with.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
To the first question: yes, you can decide what her appearance is like, thought please try to keep it within limit, she is part human after all.
As for Kody's relationship with her mom: no, she doesn't hate her. Opal's reason for lying was to prevent the Empire from re-capturing her. Since their recirds said she was dead, if Kody turned up alive under their radar... lets just say bad stuff.
Hope this helps.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
yeah. I am thinking human female. With her demonic part giving her an almost supernatural beauty. Red glowing eyes when she getsd angry and a strangely scent of sulphur when you get too close to her. sounds good?
got it. I figured there were a reason for her not telling Naomi she's alive. Thanks for clarifying.
Posted by TheGleamEyes 9 years ago Report
No problem, and sulfur. That's one thing I couldn't decide upon for Vajra... I'm glad you found a way to add it.
Posted by Fairlyn 9 years ago Report
glad to be able to help.