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Clearly it's a typical 'go hold up the storekeeper for the money in the cash register' story. With an extremely talkative shopkeeper!
Man, it feels great to be back to writing, haha!
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Posted by Argost 9 years ago Report
Wow, there's something about this one that I just adore.
Or perhaps it's all of it.
Hmm... yeah, it is everything. :-)
Posted by Garz 9 years ago Report
Hee, thanks! ^_^ It was very fun to write
Posted by bighead 9 years ago Report
Another great story. Love non-fatal stuff. Hope those two are able to connect. Maybe they can meet up again later. :)
Posted by Garz 9 years ago Report
Zalbostin /is/ a pretty friendly orc - so eager to help out.
Haha, glad you liked the story!
Posted by Tarrenger 9 years ago Report
ha! out and back in again. too good to resist i bet :3
Posted by Garz 9 years ago Report
I get the feeling he's not thinking about holding up the store anymore. :P
Thanks for the comment!
Posted by Tarrenger 9 years ago Report
You're very welcome :D
And I am almost jealous of that Raccoon X3
Posted by TheBlueEnigma 9 years ago Report
Love it! Simply divine! However when the raccoon was completely sucked in I think you could of been a bit more descriptive and make it seem more dynamic. You also could have made the part when he was going down the shaft a bit longer to draw out the erotic affect. I hope this doesn't offend you.
Posted by Garz 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Haha, it takes a lot to offend me. I do feel like I need to focus on the perspective of the eaten a bit more than I do.
This story in particular would be a bit rough with it, however, as Zalbostin had to turn to another customer, haha.
Maybe in another story, though!