Nice flow in this one ;)
I can't help trying to figure out where they are. Is the town "Home town" and the place they've gone the temple of Yppiz? Or are they "off the map" to the east and the ruins are the ones east of Hometown or a third set of ruins also off the map to the east?
To be honest I've kinda swayed from some places in the game and created some of my own. The game doesn't have the required places i need for my story but I've been studying Duams website lore info quite extensively
Well if you put the needed spaces in possible locations they could be added in :P
I mean unlike other Isharan fanfics you've kept it game related so far and yet made it your own. I think it'd be fun to run into Val or so when starting a new game :P ...hmm that'd be a short one...I'm quite certain what she'd do to me...
Bah, I teleport the character twice, or even thrice in the unfinished mod (only once in the finished ones) and on top of that have a travel by boat option.
I suppose the natural place to get to faneglut in the game would be from the demonic pit in the volcanic pass. It feels kind of tempel-ish, with that you find a tome there and all.
But I wasn't saying that everything should go in the game, none of what I've added is actually needed, it's all just fun fluff. :P
Posted by Mid_Night 9 years ago Report
i really love it, nicely done Winny.
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
thank you. ^^ was kinda worried since this chapter didn't have to much. "Juicy content" but it's to be expected when you write a story.
Posted by Mid_Night 9 years ago Report
may next chapter there will be maybe you can make Winny that Hero that Jess said about.
i am temping to make write a story with Winny on it and well the other two with her and her fairy friend.
Posted by Throku 9 years ago Report
Nice flow in this one ;)
I can't help trying to figure out where they are. Is the town "Home town" and the place they've gone the temple of Yppiz? Or are they "off the map" to the east and the ruins are the ones east of Hometown or a third set of ruins also off the map to the east?
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
To be honest I've kinda swayed from some places in the game and created some of my own. The game doesn't have the required places i need for my story but I've been studying Duams website lore info quite extensively
Posted by Throku 9 years ago Report
Well if you put the needed spaces in possible locations they could be added in :P
I mean unlike other Isharan fanfics you've kept it game related so far and yet made it your own. I think it'd be fun to run into Val or so when starting a new game :P ...hmm that'd be a short one...I'm quite certain what she'd do to me...
Posted by Throku 9 years ago Report
Well of course the old map could be rearanged a bit, but it is kind of blockish, so things need to fit the "grid".
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Also hard to describe fanglut, and brightwind as both those realms were not in the game. >.<
Posted by Throku 9 years ago Report
Bah, I teleport the character twice, or even thrice in the unfinished mod (only once in the finished ones) and on top of that have a travel by boat option.
I suppose the natural place to get to faneglut in the game would be from the demonic pit in the volcanic pass. It feels kind of tempel-ish, with that you find a tome there and all.
But I wasn't saying that everything should go in the game, none of what I've added is actually needed, it's all just fun fluff. :P