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My take on an Age-regression Virus type of story. I've always been interested in that trope going back past birth, so I finally wrote a story about it. I'm trying a very experimental style, so I'm curious what people think of it.
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Posted by DarkTau 9 years ago Report
Wow. Typically, I'm not a fan of this perspective of writing, but this is really well done.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm not usually a fan of the style either - speaking as a writer, it's really hard, because there are a lot of common tools you can't use to set the scene. But when I sat to write the idea, this was the "voice" I got from the character, so I figured I'd give it a try.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm not usually a fan of the style either - speaking as a writer, it's really hard, because there are a lot of common tools you can't use to set the scene. But when I sat to write the idea, this was the "voice" I got from the character, so I figured I'd give it a try.
Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report
This is a really interesting new style. I've seen stories told through dialogue before, but all of them showed both sides of the conversation, and none were as well done as this. I like it!
Posted by DresdenQ 9 years ago Report
I like the style and content
Posted by Goblingobler 9 years ago Report
very interesting, Grob O.o I like the concept and though I'm not usually a fan of this type, it was interesting in an interview setting like this!
Posted by usabuster 9 years ago Report
Good story as I too enjoyed it.
Posted by tuyulacil 9 years ago Report
like my dream come true. I dream about my wife turn into lesbianism. i enjoy my jealousy, my humiliation. i just a tiny insignificant huby for my wife and her wife.
than's a lot
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
You're welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it.