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A nightmare monster has begun skulking the moonlight over Tamriel's northern province. Skyrim faces a monster that according to witnesses carries the looks of a dragon, but the shape of a werewolf... could such a creature exist? What twisted magician could conjure such a thing? The Jarl of the haunted area, along with his childhood friend and love; the local Alchemist, attempts to solve this mystery...
Warning, this story is quite graphic in descriptions of Gore and violence.
Audiobook version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BiX6NX4R2aQ
Skyrim / The Elder Scrolls series is Copyright Bethesta Entertainment.
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Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
...is...this another commission or...one of your own works?
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Sparetime project of my own =)
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
...I see.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Been a while since I uploaded anything
vore-related, and I had this story laying
about anyway. Sorry if it isn't my regular
style / stuff, but I thought I might as well.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Nah, I understand. It can be good to vary it up.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Was it too cliché or gorey? =/
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
I...don't think I should comment. I just think the ending wasn't for me, and I'll leave it at that.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Fair enough =I Sorry though.
I am not the best at twists.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
I do have ONE bit you could improve on: the italicized speech. It can be somewhat confusing. So you may want to rethink that unless, I dunno, the person is doing an internal monologue, or the person talking is whispering, etc, etc.
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Roger. I'll reconsider that part.
I started doing it becuse people
complained over not being able to
tell dialoge from rest of text.
Posted by Trexthepony 9 years ago Report
Hope we can hit are rp soon ^^
Posted by GUEST19216 9 years ago Report
The ending at first confused me but then it made sense....good writing even though parts of it were not for me it is a good write
Posted by Komodo 9 years ago Report
Thanks mate. You're not the only who
didn't like the ending, so I'll try
to keep it more traditional in the
future =) Thanks for commenting!