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Here we are, Chapter 7... Strictly speaking, this portion of the story contains my first -real- go at a sex scene in writing. (Under several layers of polish of course)
Anyway, we're here, and we find Leon is actually having a rather nice day for a change... Things are all looking up! Things are getting better! Things are... That's a spoiler, we'll just have to read to find out...
As always, Thank you for reading, and tell me what you think...
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Posted by slickwick45 9 years ago Report
So this problem with Leon has an actual physical form? I've heard of people referring to problems as monsters or beasts before but this is something different. It sounds much closer to a possession than a psychological disorder.
On that note the story itself was done very well and I am so anxiously waiting for Fred and Onyxia to get their turn together
Posted by ShadowLurker 9 years ago Report
On the first paragraph of your comment, I'm having trouble coming up with something to say, probably because you've hit everything I could have said in one go... (Although, I've never considered it from the possession angle before, thanks for pointing that out)
On the second paragraph; thank you for the compliment, I'm glad you liked the story thus far... And as for Fred and Onyxia... Those nasty spoiler tags get everywhere...