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(4,500 words, alien abduction, body horror, unusual vore, multiple aliens / human male)
Brian is awoken by an alien visitor outside the door. Want they want from him, he doesn't mind parting with, but the way they go about it leaves him speechless.
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Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Wow, that is NOT cool. That's essentially rape, you realize, that they just did? And I hope the judges get diarrhea from what they eat.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
...I'm not sure if you're serious or not. But, yes... I figured it was pretty much safe to assume that the vast majority of what I post shows non-consensual activity.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
I don't know how to feel about this work. I guess I really should point out the positive. I certainly feel for poor Brian. He has a VERY realistic reaction to everything that's going on, and realism in vore work is so damn rare. And it's also incredibly well-detailed. But I don't much like seeing innocent people suffering in the name of supposed comedy or to move a plot forward. It's misplaced and misguided at best, and emotionally manipulative at worst.
The way it's SUPPOSED to work is that we want people who are bad to suffer because we feel a sense of catharsis and release, that they're getting karmic comeuppance. It's why we laugh when Tom gets the s--t kicked out of him: he's always trying to eat poor Jerry who just wants to be left alone. It's why we, at first, wanted to see Squidward punished: he was an arrogant jerk who was always unpleasant towards Spongebob and deserved to be taken down a peg. And it's why we liked seeing Joffrey from Game of Thrones finally die a horrible death: he was a bully, a pig and a murderer and his suffering was satisfying because it was the culimination of a lifetime of being awful.
But simply having innocent being suffer and die? Yeah...no. That's not entertainment. It's just sadism.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
I suppose what you'd need to understand, then, is that these stories - and really nothing in my gallery - are NOT meant to be morality tales. They are fetish works. As such, they don't represent what I think is proper moral behavior, nor do I condone rape, torture, or murder.
But not everybody's fetish works the same way. I have absolutely no interest in 'vore as punishment'. In fact, it actively turns me off. Being eaten is not 'comeuppance', it's murder. The death penalty is a very serious thing, not to be thrown around lightly.
No, for me, the fetish works such that I want the pred/domme/whatever to get what they want -despite- the cost to the prey/sub/whatever. I'm not a sadist (or a masochist) - I'm pretty frightened by pain, to be honest, and abhor the idea of inflicting it on others. But my fantasy world is distinct from the real world. I write things I would not really want to happen, because that's the way my fetish works.
As it happens, while it's not universal, that mindset is very common here. I'm pleased you liked the writing, and I'm pleased you chose to comment, and I'm flattered that you can see the good parts in it even if it makes you sad and uncomfortable. But if you go about reading and writing the stuff that's posted here, you'll find that the majority of the stuff here features innocent prey treated badly - in some cases very badly. There is more stuff closer to how a pack of lions treats the impala they catch than than there is how we want Joffrey to be treated.
It's absolutely fine for you to have your own likes and dislikes and opinions and to read whatever feeds into those or don't as you prefer. But be very careful about making comments about how real-world morality should work within the context of fetish smut. :)
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Wow. You're very articulate! Not to mention very civil. I wish more writers on the site were like you, because they treat the tiniest bit of criticism as if it was a mortal insult against their mother or something.
Posted by eatmeplease 9 years ago Report
People like that drive me up a wall!
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
Thank you. I'm glad it halfway made sense. I'm out sick today, so I probably should have waited to reply until my brain was 100% in my head.
Posted by eatmeplease 9 years ago Report
I felt that Brian was secretly enjoying the whole thing. And hey, it didn't hurt at all!
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Hmm. That's something I didn't pick up on right away. Good eye!
Posted by eatmeplease 9 years ago Report
It was mostly projecting. I'm super willing prey, so I tend to project my own feelings onto the prey in stories I read or images I view.
Posted by eatmeplease 9 years ago Report
Very, very sexy! I love how he gets to melt down at the end, lucky human.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
Ship food! :)
Posted by eatmeplease 9 years ago Report
I actually roleplayed something like that once! But it wasn't organic. Silent-Hunter was incinerated.
Your writing is seriously awesome!
Posted by Skittles209 9 years ago Report
I like this, kind of like District 9... only with the actions reversed.
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
Thank you! :)
Posted by Syndrome 9 years ago Report
Holy Hell! That was amazing! I've always loved the idea of being abducted and eaten by aliens, but you took this to a whole new level! I mean it's just wonderful! Bravo!
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
<grin> Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Syndrome 9 years ago Report
Not a problem!