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Nothing special here. A short and very simple tale of girl-eats-boy.
It's not an IVC story, but I've put it in this folder because it implicitly happens in the same general setting.
Be warned, it contains a brief but explicit toilet scene.
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Posted by Bags 9 years ago Report
You might not think they are special but I very much do.
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
Thank you indeed! :)
Posted by 4ofSwords 9 years ago Report
So I think what I like about this story, as with the others, is something I have a hard time pinning down. I know exactly what it is, but it is a hard thing to describe. It's a sort of delicate reproduction of realistic emotions and mannerism, that sort of thing that in art makes us say of a painting - yes, the light -does- do that there, but I wouldn't have noticed it, or I wouldn't have thought to use blue in the trees but it captures that rise in the woods just right. It makes me smile and picture the characters more than I would have if you spent a paragraph describing them, and it makes them kind of lovely, like people you'd want to know and be happy to be around. And that makes me very interested to see what happens in the story, even when, if presented in a summary, I might be prone to shrug and think, "not my thing."
Posted by French_snack 9 years ago Report
That's a very interesting remark; thank you. I'm all the more glad as it's basically what I hope to achieve: making the characters feel "real", like perfectly normal (but nice), relatable people. People who do and think and say and feel normal things, I suppose. (When they're not busy eating people, or being eaten!)
Heroic or superhuman characters have never really interested me. I enjoy working on the interactions between simple but reasonably realistic characters. And I've realised that I do tend to generally make them "nice". Even my rare monstrous characters (such as Emily in my previous story) are in some ways "like us", with relatable emotions and concerns and frailties.
Posted by oishi1 8 years ago Report
That is the very thing that draws me to French Snack's stories. Nailed it.
Posted by Indighost 8 years ago Report
Very sweet and simple :) i love it!
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Thanks! A bit of nice friendly vore. ;)
Posted by oishi1 8 years ago Report
I enjoyed the fact that you stuck to Tanya ' s point of view. The ambiguity and indifference to what he was doing made the story. The character is interesting. You manage to give a certain gravity to willing vore that I don't often see. Something big and final is happening. I don't know if it makes sense, but the anticlimactic denouement really sold the story. It wasn't what she was expecting. It never is. On the other side, you know it wasn't what John expected either.
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Thanks. Yes, those are interesting points. Tanya of course can never really know exactly what's going on in John's mind, what exactly he's feeling - and nor would she want to. So to emphasise that, we're placed in a similar position to her: John's mind remains largely unknown to us, and always will be now.
I have indeed found that playing on ambiguity or unknowability can add a faint sense of graveness, which would be lacking if we were (for example) plunged into a sense of a prey character's eagerness or excitement. Maybe it's because there's a hint of loss as well as of finality? Something (a person's mind and being) that we never fully grasped is gone.
Posted by kbDArt 8 months ago Report
Would love to see more about Tanya. I wonder if her interactions with her soccer buddies will change now that she's really eaten a person.
Posted by French_snack 8 months ago Report
She might tease them a bit, I think, but other than that, she'll just be herself. The fun, carefree girl they've always known and wanted. :)