Thanks! Particularly in the case of these Ultra-Quickies, which are nearly always the result of sleep deprivation, I tend to have really off the wall concepts in my noodle.
I'm really glad you liked it. This was one of my late night "can't sleep, let me write a story" stories. They tend to be short, hence the lack of detail.
Posted by SuperSpaceZone 9 years ago Report
The concept is kind of awesome. I like how you do a lot of unconventional scenarios, and swallowing via hiccups is definitely one of them!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Particularly in the case of these Ultra-Quickies, which are nearly always the result of sleep deprivation, I tend to have really off the wall concepts in my noodle.
Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
I love it, but even more details would be great!
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
I'm really glad you liked it. This was one of my late night "can't sleep, let me write a story" stories. They tend to be short, hence the lack of detail.
Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
Short can be good too, and I liked the detail you did give, but I always love more. :D
Posted by Sharktooth987 8 years ago Report
there need to be a part two
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
Involving what? More accidental hic-gulping, or the escape of the hic-gulped prey?
Posted by Sharktooth987 7 years ago Report
The second one
Like maybe the guy decides he doesn't want her to come out
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
I'm not much for fatal or permanent vore, but if anyone else wants to pick it up where I left off, that'd be fine with me.
Posted by Sharktooth987 7 years ago Report
I like permanent vore not fatal tho
Have any other female prey accident storys?
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Most of my prey are female. I know I've got a few more accidental ones, probably scattered about in the "One Shot" category.
Posted by Sharktooth987 7 years ago Report
Non fatal right?