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You're A traveler hiking through a forest and got lost it in. Now, in the rain, you are looking for shelter and just so happen stumble across a cave. That should do, right?
My first attempt at writing a vore story and doing so in the second person. I apologize in advance for any grammar and/or spelling mistakes.
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Posted by TootCore 9 years ago Report
Very nice story, quite enjoyable ! The gentleness of the pred alonide with her 'hammock' stomach properties make this story great, and the writing is very correct, if not good.
Keep up the good work ! :D
Posted by Omega_Code 9 years ago Report
Thanks :)
Posted by Camlio420 9 years ago Report
Very Nice Story, Saving to read it again and again, take my fave and my watch. Looking forwards to more from you~
Posted by Omega_Code 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much! :) I got a squeal for this in the plan, though knowing my writing speed it might take a while until it's finish. Still, thanks for the watch and the fav!
Posted by straightup2006 9 years ago Report
Hey, hey, not bad for a first time!
Posted by TheRenic 9 years ago Report
Nice work, some advice, some of the grammar is off, I would have a friend who is proficient in English Grammar proofread for you to iron out the spelling an grammar erros and i would continue it on a bit, tell what happens next fer say. tats all i have i enjoyed the story.
Posted by playafreek 9 years ago Report
Great story, but check your grammar in the future.