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FOE:DT Part 9 (Bad End) By Cainiam -- Report

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People might be a little sore over this one, but I did plan for Option C to be the bad end from the start. My reasoning was quite simple, and is demonstrated here and in the correct part. Dust has speed thanks to VATs, and Zephyr has accuracy thanks to experience. I should have made that more obvious on reflection, but I'm sure another bad end won't be something to complain about anyway.

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SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 9 years ago Report

Damn, oh well. Just have to try harder next time. Good ending.

silverspec

Posted by silverspec 9 years ago Report

I'm sore. But that's because I jogged yesterday. I like these alternative arcs, because reasons. Anyway, thanks for keeping up with the story. I'm enjoying 'em. ^^

silverspec

Posted by silverspec 9 years ago Report

Your writing is quite nice.

Speedyblupi

Posted by Speedyblupi 8 years ago Report

" the two had some super hot sex that was so intense I can’t describe it in words."

Lazy writing is best writing :P

Cainiam

Posted by Cainiam 8 years ago Report

Heh, this was back when I was consciously trying to update every day so I might have taken some shorcuts.