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In the Heart of the Desert Spirit By Emberell -- Report

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After an age of writing, and an age longer of proofreading, I am proud to present my first story! This is a story about the adventures of one Pokémon trainer and his Flygon, a romantic tale of their relationship as they leave civilization behind them and blaze their own trail. For those with open minds who do not wish to spoil what lies inside, leave the warning below aside - but if you find yourself contemning adult stories for daring to be less vanilla, be warned rather than complain.

Adult Content Warning: Non-Morphic Flygon unbirthing a pure blood human. Including but not limited to oral sex, transformation and regression, and the eventual rebirth of the newly made egg. You have been warned!

Misc. Content Warning: Volence (pokemon battles), Long preamble before the story, vorish content (see above!)

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Author's Comments

This story was a story that took hold in my mind and refused to leave me alone until I had it all down on paper. Basically, this story exemplifies exactly what I desire from vore: A lengthy exchange to set the tone and flavor of the meal before absolutely thoroughly enjoying it. Gentle, soft, but powerfully passionate nevertheless. The story of Liam and Sofia is a much longer one than is displayed here - I have carefully tracked their venture for their entire relationship that spans eight or so years. As such, if there are any questions about their past please do feel free to ask! Just be prepared for a thorough answer - I have no plans to put to paper any of their prior wanderings - I have rather more interesting stories in mind for the future! Hopefully, they won't take nearly as long as this one took to produce.

I do hope it does not need to be said, but do not re-upload this story elsewhere, do not take it and claim it as your own, etcetera. If there is somewhere where you would like to see this story, please contact me before all else and I will see about getting it up there.

I am not looking for critique on my work. Please respect this. If you absolutely must point out a typographical mistake or suggest changes, please contact me privately. Any other method will be summarily ignored and hidden.

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Nornim

Posted by Nornim 9 years ago Report

I can tell a lot of love went into this piece and I can say for certain, this is the longest unbirth sequence I've ever read. Good show.

Emberell

Posted by Emberell 9 years ago Report

People have told me before I tend to get carried away - I never quite realized how much that was true until I saw that this unbirth sequence mirrored the thirteen pages of writing before it! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Nornim

Posted by Nornim 9 years ago Report

What I consider getting carried away is just an extra paragraph or two, this seems more like a dedication to detail when I first read it.

M4tth3w

Posted by M4tth3w 6 years ago Report

So with Liam is he still him or pretty much a blank mind with no memories of his former life. If so wouldn't flygon feel bad for in a sense kinda killed him anyways cause its wouldn't be him anymore. Also would is there relationship now?

Emberell

Posted by Emberell 6 years ago Report

The way I wrote this was to leave the ending ambiguous. Even if Liam here retained all of his knowledge from his former life, none of that was experience living as a Trapinch, after all! Either way, though, the Flygon, Sophia, took what was in her mind the best option for the moment. With Liam mortally poisoned, doing nothing in this case would have literally been letting him die. By taking him as her own, he lives on - as much as might be possible here, even if his memories were lost in the process, she knows its still him.

Regarding their relationship - goodness knows, it would change radically. Again, it depends on whether Liam kept his memories or not - but either way, she'll be a good and responsible mother to him as long as that's needed. In her mind, he would (and has done!) the same for her in the past - and if that means giving him up as a mate, their love is something stronger than just sexual.

Long story short: it's complicated, and hard to answer! I don't doubt that you're right in a lot of ways, too, that Sophia will end up regretting having to change him, It's a huge shift for the both of them, but it was never meant to be something insurmountable.

I hope that answers your question! If there's anything else, please don't hesitate to ask ^ v ^